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Originally Posted by EB_Nall
Episode 2: The Embrace.
Merrick's descent into a World of Darkness continues as he wakes up in Virginia's room tied down to her bed. WARNING!!! This episode contains violence, strong language and mature situations.
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It's good to see your keeping up with this. What's it been? Only a couple of weeks since you finished the first episode? Your production rate is impressive, as is your cast.
Merrick Steele: EB_Nall) Acting in your own production, there are verying points of view on self casting as you've probably read on this board. If you can carry it off then what's the problem? Action scenes you may need to look at and work on, I sence your holding back a little. Apart from that good job.
Virginia Esposito: Mizura) By good god dam you can cut a fresh slice of evil when you put your mind to it.
Baron Francis Ravencroft: Nick Tiner) Very Hellraiseresque delivery, like some great cog of an insane infernal machine your tired, jaded, impossibly old and yet still you have a duty to turn.
Prince Nigel Wellington: Edwyn) Well, well, well, Ed's back doing what Ed does best.... dripping slices of decadence that would put the Hellfire club's bumper Christmas hamper to shame.
Mixing) Loads of layers, so that's all for the good. Competent scene changes (always tricky) some effects were a little rough around the edges, but then you can tweek till your blue in the face, it's a law of deminishing returns.