[ichigo_m]

Main Cast
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Maria Ushiromiya: Ichigo_m
Rosa Ushiromiya: MissAck
Jessica Ushiromiya: Ayame
Natsuhi Ushiromiya: Kairi
Eva Ushiromiya: LightofHope18
Battler Ushiromiya: CountAbyss
George Ushiromiya: GForce
Hideyoshi Ushiromiya: Majinboo0111
Kanon: LilGunmanX
Shannon: Lady
Genji Ronoue: VoiceActingNinja
Terumasa Nanjo: BladeBlur
Chiyo: Usako
Beatrice: Hatty
Bernkastel: EKYO
Lambadelta: Kennidy
Virgilia: Lady
Ange: Mizura
Ronove: Genshie
Sakutaro: Kamuro
Beelzelbub: Teru
Lucifer: BlauweGiraf
Mammon: Ateotu
Belphegor: Miku-tan
Satan: ChocoKasumi
Leviathan: Astraia
Asomodeus: ElliottSkywalker


Mixing: Ichigo_m
SFX: The VAA SFX Library and other sites
BGM: Higurashi no Naku Koro ni (Kai) OST, Jigoku Shoujo OST, Umineko no Naku Koro ni Game OST
Scripting: Ichigo_m (unless other wise stated)


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Episode 15 Clip - "The Golden Witch - Eva-Beatrice"
(7/21/10)

Clip 7

Episode 14 Clip - "Beatrice vs Beatrice"
(6/22/10)

Clip 6

Episode 11 Clip - "And For Dessert..."
(5/25/10)

Clip 5

Episode 4 Clip - "I Am the Zero on Your Roulette!"
(5/1/10)

Clip 4

Script by InstraClassic

Episode 7 Clip - "The Magic of a Witch"
(10/21/09)

Clip 3

FEAT. Majia as Beatrice
Script by InstraClassic

Episode 2 Clip - "the First Blood Shead"
(9/8/09)

Clip 2

Script by InstraClassic


Episode 1 Clip - "Maria's Rose"
(8/10/09)

Clip 1

Script by InstraClassic

[cruc1f1x21]

wow. O_O.
That was a very intense little scene there.
Everything sounded so...perfect. It's like it wasn't even close to fandubbed. Very nice job!

At points, Rosa sounded a little out of it and wasn't as forceful as i believe it should have been, but it sounded fine throughout.
GForce, superb job with George. That was incredibly done O_O. -claps-

Amazing job over all, I can't wait for some more Clips

[CountAbyss]

I remember watching this part of the episode, poor Maria.

One note, lip flaps seemed to be a problem at times, that's all. =/

Will put up full critique later.

[Zangya]

I'm gonna be honest....

This fandub...the acting...didn't seem all that intense at all. There was energy lacking from all the characters. I liked Maria's voice, it suited her well. But when it came time for her mother to tell her to stop crying...the preformance lacked energy and emotion. The yelling was quite weak, and it didn't give me chills like the original clip would have. It sounded like MissAck was holding back. And since her character, imo, was the main focus on the fandub...it kind of brought the quality down. I thought all the characters voices fit their characters, it was just the lack of emotion from the characters that were supposed to have an over the top reaction. CountAbyss, your voice fit Battler nicely, but I wasn't really feeling your lines...even though you only had a couple. You didn't sound very concerned...which was, I think, how he was supposed to sound. Try to have more energy the next time around.

I can't say much about Ayame, since she only had 2 lines...but I like what I heard so far. (:

I very much adored Ichigom's preformance. Very annoying. Which is what it should be for this scene.

Gforce, you didn't really say much, but I did enjoy your voice for the character.

As for the mixing, mouth flaps were a bit flip floppy at parts, and some of the sfx sounded a bit low quality and choppy. Other than that, nice job.

I hope to hear more from you guys~

[Akumaryu]

Battler (CountAbyss): I thought your voice suited the character very well. Your lines were delivered clearly, and the quality was good too. Be a little careful not to slur your words when you speak. Fast lines are hard to deliver, so just be careful.

Maria (ichigo_m): It's hard for me to give any criticism for this. It seemed like you had some issues matching the lip-flaps, although that could be related to the script. Also, I have to admit that I found your character ridiculously annoying. But then again, she's supposed to be. So really, I'm just going to say good job, and please don't hate me for giving crappy critique. >_<

Jessica (Ayame-chan): You didn't have very many lines, but I liked the definition you had to the character. She seemed to be proper and polite, which I think fit. Nice work.

Rosa (MissAck): Holy cow!! That was you?! Very well done. I definitely liked the authority in your voice. It would have been nice to hear a bit more to some of the lines, as it seemed like you were holding back a bit. Don't be afraid to really let loose. I know I have the same problem, so you just have to keep working at it.

George (GForce): I've never seen you do a role like this. It was refreshing. I liked the maturity in the voice you chose for this character. Very clear diction, too. No complaints! ^_^

Mixing: There was a nice feel and flow to everything. Some of the lines seemed to have some syncing issues, but nothing too terrible. Nice work.

Overall: This was a good clip. I hope to see more from you guys in the future where some of the other characters can have a little more screen time.

[ichigo_m]

Yhea there were some major lip-flap issues that will not occur in the next clip~

+Bump

[Cake Batter]

I'm going to have to agree with FMA here. I'll be honest and say I've never watched this before and this clip wasn't bad, but it definitely lacked the intensity that I feel is warrented in this kind of scene.

Miss Ack [Rosa] had a rather nice and mature voice for the character but I feel like she could have went further with her emotion. The animation has her looking a bit on the verge of being hysterical(?) and I wish that had come through in the performance. ichigo_m [Maria], I loved your tone and your performance at the beginning was really good and fitting, but as the clip went on I feel you should have given it just a bit more energy.

CountAbyss [Battler], overall your performance was good, but I do think there should have been a bit more worry in your voice at the end. GForce [George] and Ayame-chan [Jessica] you guys didn't say much but I did like what I heard.

As for the mixing, the wind at the beginning stood out to me as sounding a bit odd to me but other than that, everything seemed in place. Lip flaps seemed to be off in some places.

Overall, this was pretty good though~ I'll be watching out for the next clip.

[xSPADEofHEART]

Umineko~8D Ichigo_m makes an adorably irking Maria and I really liked the voices that everyone gave their characters.<3 Er, I don't really have anything to add-on critique-wise except that I agree with what FMA said about the clip lacking the impact that it had originally. Battler couldn't have been more shocked and worried on his 2nd to last line and Rosa felt like she was holding back a lot and felt really stale on her last couple lines. I still really liked this though!:3

[ichigo_m]

Battler: CountAbyss: I'm very very very happy with the voice you used I think it fit battler perfectly. Emotion was perfect, I can't wait to have you in the next clip~
Maria: Ichigo_m: RAWR! I'm very dissapointed with my performance here, I'm sick or I would have redone my lines more. sorry guys, I'll do better next time.
Jessica: Ayame-chan: Just a few lines but I'm very happy with them~ YAY~
Rosa: MissAck: I absolutely adore the pitch you used for her, But I think you were lacking some emotion. Rosa is really yelling at Maria here and just were kinda scolding her. Go crazy~ That's what killerlolis would do! =D
George: GForce: Once again just a few lines, but still nice job~

Mixing: meh~
Scripting: I'm so glad I didn't have to script this~ I hate scripting~ It turned out really well~ Thanks Sky~

[ichigo_m]

Bump-a-bump-bump~