[Rikdo_Osaka]

http://emeraldparkproductions.mypodc..._1-151482.html

Cast:

Shinigami_Yuumura ... Hikari Yagami
Chibi_Riki ... Young Misa (Flashback Character)
BigTUnit1 .... Light Yagami (Flashback Character)/Bully
PhotoShopTimeRyan ... Director
Rikdo Osaka ... Bully's Target
Mippa ... Older Misa
Teacher Nine .... Mr. Ichihashi

Written by Shinigami_Yuumura
Mixed by Rikdo Osaka

[Kage-Ichihashi]

I like it, I like it! But why is it so short? XD Not bad overall. The voices were well-chosen, but unfortunately, the mic quality for some of them leaves a lot to be desired. I'll give a full critique when I can do more than just a listen-through. :3 Good job to everyone, though.

[Dabiu]

Awesome work! I love the idea, a next generation thing ;D!!

Now fer mah critique-

Shinigami_Yuumura||Hikari Yagami- MINI LIGHT!! I found it hard at first to tell it's gender, but that's want you call a boyish girl's voice, correct xD! I love the voice though, it seemed to fit her way of things. The mini light way~!! But the mic quality was okay, it's needs fixing.
Chibi_Riki||Young Misa- I loved it xD, end of story~! [mic quality good xD]
BigTUnit1||Light Yagami- You have a very good light. I sounded a lot like the dub light. With his voice is still awesome *o*!! Well, I saw nothing basically wrong~
Bully- It makes me thing.. are you really a bully at school xD?! Wel, it's a very good bully voice, and it greatly differed from Light's voice, so you couldn't tell it was by the same person. Yay <3
Mic quality for both was good!
PhotoShopTimeRyan||Director- Very Directorish! I loved it, lol. It fixed his voice well and what was happening. Mic quality was okay.
Rikdo Osaka||Bully's Target- Awww, it was sad what was happening to him. But the scared sense you got from him and the youngish voice fit very well. Mic quality is good.
Mippa||Older Misa- I never would of expect her older voice like this! It fits very well. An older motherly Misa, very fit. Good voice ;D
Teacher Nine||Mr. Ichihashi- Another great fitting voice. Teacherish and awesome ;D! Quality in mic was good.

Mixing- It's awlays great! I love yer mixing so much xD! Nothing went wrong, and you could clearly hear what was happening with the sfx.
Story- Quite a good one. I would of never thought of something this great. Lol, maybe it's cause I'm no that creative <3.

YAY!
Over all
I Loved it <3!!
Great job everyone~!

[Rikdo_Osaka]

The story of the radioplay started off as an genderbending project but it build up to a next generation and what if one. I would like to thank Shinigami_Yuumura for letting me be part of this one as an co-writer. I was thinking of having one more person joining if anyone is interesting in helping us build up to the final ending.

[Shinigami_Yuumura]

WOW OMG Its finally up! ^^ it turned out better than I expected. ^^;
I really really like this, since it was made so long ago I was starting to lose hope! but now it's better than before I really like it ^^ I'm now inspired for the upcoming events later on. Thank you everyone!

[Rikdo_Osaka]

Shinigami_Yuumura, I also look forward to writing the rest of the story and hope it doesn't take another long time for the next one to come out. Anyway, I would like to thank the whole cast for waiting a long time for this one to come out. You al did a great job portraying your characters and being part of this.

[SouthParkFanFuranki]

Very interesting, I have no gripes/nitpicks. Nice job, everyone.

Also, clever name for Hikari, actual word for Light in Japanese.
Are any Shinigami going to appear? 'Cause I'd love to help with that, I'm pretty good at Shinigami voices, at least, I think so...

[Shinigami_Yuumura]

I had a steady cast list up but since I lost my original copy do to computer issues I may spice up the story just a little.

[rebelcheese]

I'll take a stab at this:

Mixing sounded all right to me. Music was audible and didn't interfere but complemented the scenes. There was nothing that screamed "SOMETHING'S MISSING" to me.

Voices:

Overall sounded fine. Mippa was a great older Misa, able to channel the character's seemingly eternal youth but also subtly revealing her age. Shinigumi did Hikari very well, and the parallels with her father are scary, she's basically a powder keg waiting for a spark. Chibi_Riki was difficult to understand, though, and the pops were getting aggravating. BigT was great as always as both flashback Light and the current bully. The other voices were decent but not memorable (then again do you expect them to be?).

Story: While I'm sure that Hikari's parallels to Light here are intentional, couldn't you have found something different for Hikari to focus on? Right now her story parellels Light's way too closely in my opinion. I think it would be a nice touch if you added more of a sci-fi influence as well, remember that the manga version had Light's death figured at 2009, fifteen years have passed since then. We are definitely in the 2020s here.

[Shinigami_Yuumura]

Ah I see your point then I'll sure to spice it up and not make it so much like Hikari and Light the same. However I wanted to focus on that Hikari hates her mother very much. But cannot have the heart to kill her.