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Original [ORIGINAL] Deep Within (Part 9 FIXED!!) - 06-02-2008, 01:58 PM

Deep Within.

This is an original story of mine that I thought would be fun to make into a radio play. The plot is as fallows.
Vlad Solomon the prince of the once flourishing devil race, is now the prince of a nearly extinct people. His lover Kite, for unknown reasons, gained incredible power and went on a massacre killing everyone she could find. He learns of a talisman that has the power to defeat her, however, it is lost somewhere on Earth---knowing this, Kite moves her attack onto Earth and now the human race shares the same fate as the devils.
Vlad, heart broken and desperate as he searches for a way to stop his once ‘true love’, tries to sooth his loneliness by turning human females into devils---a ritual that ALWAYS ends in failure. Then one day, on a routine search of Earth, he stumbles across the mysterious Genki, an injured human girl whom, for unknown reasons captivates him. He takes her back with him, and makes her a devil---she quickly falls in love with him, but…is there more to her then what she seems? And what is the reason behind Kite‘s betrayal…?
This is a story of love and betrayal. It has dark settings, some-what graphic character deaths, minor swearing, and implied sex

Part 2-6 has been posted! Enjoy

A great big Thank you to all of my CAST you were all wonderful!

Part 1: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=JKMFEXUM
Time: 15:00
Size: 13.74 MB
Format: MP3
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Part 2: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=5BYUM6MF
Time: 15:35
Size:17.8 MB
Format: MP3

Part 3: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=0FTJ37O7
Time: 19:40
Size: 22.5 MB
Format: MP3

Part 4: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=AAPXMIMA
Time: 13:00
Size: 14.8 MB
Format: MP3

Part 5: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=W6JRQQY4
Time: 24:50
Size: 28.4 MB
Format: MP3

Part 6: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=1M664UYV
Time: 20:00
Size: 22.8 MB
Format: MP3

Part 7: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=9EQLO3JN
Size: 13.43 MB
Format: MP3

Part 8: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=AAOF8FI0
Size: 18 MB
Format: MP3

Part 9 (FIXED): http://www.megaupload.com/?d=40I3W6V5

Size: 12.5
Format: mp3

CAST IN ORDER OF APPEARANCE

Vlad --- Osborne creations
Jeri --- Niko Ford
Kuremi --- Belladonna Gardenia
Jan --- Bomberman61
Genki --- Mochan
Cain --- Teachermine
Kite --- QueenDuranie
Veronica --- Minty
Flora --- Sassie Girl
Holly --- Ninkitsu
Resistance Leader --- Lee James Sand
King Solomon --- Claude
Devil 1 --- Pearly 505
Devil 2 --- Little Star
Devil 3 --- Jay-Jay
Devil 4 --- Osborne Creations

Sound effects: From Sound Dogs and Homemade.
Music: Sound dogs, Production Free music, Various Anime and Video games.

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Re: Deep Within (Part 1 up) - 06-02-2008, 04:39 PM

I was just thinking about this last night! =D

I don't think these were in order of appearance, would have been nice since these are brand new, original characters.

Vlad: Osborne creations: You have a very commanding yet kind voice. It fit very well for Vlad.
Genki: Mochan: That voice hurt after a while, but I LOVE this character! =D I was way too quiet, though. ;_;
Kite: QueenDuranie: Oh my, I love this character! *_* Your emotion and delivery were very well done.
Jan: Bomerman61: Controlling as always! XD
Kuremi: Belladonna Gardenia: I think you did a very good job, but you were just too loud sometimes and a little choppy in some parts, but over all your emotion was good.
Jeri: Niko Ford: I like this role for you, you play the irritated role very well. =P

Those were the only people I could pin point out of this episode...I get the feeling not everyone up there was in this episode. ^^;

The transitions were a bit lower in volume than everything else, I had to turn it up and then turn it back down when others spoke. The voices weren't leveled out very well, either, especially with your voice Belladonna, and I seemed to be way too softer than everyone else. The music was too loud in some places, especially when I spoke and the SFX could have been turned down just a bit as well. Hm, the footsteps weren't very aware, I think they were turned down a bit too much.

The story is very interesting. Even though I'm in it, I'm intrigued! XD Can't wait for more!

EDIT: Also, try mediafire.com for a download site instead, it's a lot better than megaupload.


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Re: Deep Within (Part 1 up) - 06-02-2008, 07:08 PM

I have to agree with Mo and mediafire. I've tried to download it twice and megaupload isn't playing nicely with dial-up.

Could I have the second B in my name? It looks weird as "bomerman."



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Re: Deep Within (Part 1 up) - 06-04-2008, 03:25 PM

The music in this paired with the scenes wonderfuly. The sound effects were also very good too making it easy to follow. Lines were overpowered at times but atleast it sounded nice when it was ^_^;

I was a little thrown off by the scene change lines. I knew what they were suposed to say but what I heard was quite different. I know the line is "August Third, Earth" but it sounds like "August Turd, Ert". A friend of mine who listened to it thought the word was suposed to be turd, thus kind of ruining the effectivness of the scene change information. You might think of looking into casting someone to do the scene changes for you.
  
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Re: Deep Within (Part 1 up) - 06-09-2008, 04:18 AM

WOOT!!! I can't wait to hear it.
*Goes to upload Pt. 1*
  
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Re: Deep Within (Part 2-6 up) - 07-29-2008, 01:25 PM

Parts 2 to 6 has been posted! Sorry for the wait; I'll be uploading them to mediafire later!
  
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Re: Deep Within (Part 2-6 up) - 07-30-2008, 12:21 AM

YAY!!! I'll have to download them. Looks like I have something to listen to while driving to Otakon.
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Re: Deep Within (Part 2-6 up) - 08-05-2008, 06:14 PM

I don't know if it helps but I'd be willing to host this on my site if that helps? You knwo in case the Mediafire files ever expire like Sendspace does after a while.
  
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Re: Deep Within (Part 2-6 up) - 08-06-2008, 12:55 PM

Wow, thanks SandsO, that'd be great! Thanks!
  
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Re: Deep Within (Part 2-6 up) - 08-07-2008, 03:46 PM

Ok I'll let you know when it's posted. It might not be until next week I'm afraid.
  
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