[Masako-kun]

Kasai Productions present "FUTURE PERFECT" Entry #1 - She Came From The Stars!

A girl from the 23rd century is sent back to the 21st in order to live a normal, carefree live...that is until the future comes back to haunt her! With the help of Europan cadet Darick, Arla Nayleigh is about to embark on a new journey back to her home world and meet her real parents for the first time.

PART A
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Running Time: 11:18

PART B
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Running Time: 12:41

FULL [PARTS A+B]
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Running Time: 23:58
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CAST (in order of appearance)
Norman Cosmos - P3RFECT
Esrel Cosmos - Pretty Kunoichi
James Nayleigh - Whatocean
Maxi Nayleigh - Betsy
Arla Cosmos - YingFaStar
Darick - Koivo
Student #1 - Scarlotte
Student #2 - Mochan
Mark Collins - Whatocean
Teacher - Rosegirl18
Prof. Nuxelburg - HandsomeZelos

OST
Doctor Who
Bokusatsu Tenshi Dokuro-chan
Nadesico

Well, after I started writing this script a year ago, it has gone through many changes. First, it was completely like an anime with Japanese names and everything. However, thanks to several readings and consultation [thank you topleka! ^^], it changed back to regular names...and I feel like it's better that way. Thanks to all the cast for being punctual and I look forward to do the next parts with you guys.

Comments are appreciated! Enjoy!

[Whatocean]

This was outstanding, man!

So this used to be like an anime radioplay.
Well, aside from the name changes, it certainly has that feel from the music, sound effects, and the comedy elements.

Everyone did excellent. YingFaStar is an awesome central character.

[YingFaStar]

:O...!

I will write up a critique when I'm done listening!

EDIT:

Norman Cosmos - P3RFECT
I say, work on annunciating a little better. Here and there, I had no idea what you said. Also, it sounds like it's difficult for you to put enough emotion in? Like, I can see some emotion in your lines, but there are parts were it sounds really forced/fake. (Like that "damnit, woman!" line...I feel it could've sounded much angrier, even if it was a joke.)

Esrel Cosmos - Pretty Kunoichi
I really liked your voice for this! It's so energetic! And put this little kinda..."spunky"...sort of sound to it, but still mom-like. It was cool-sounding XD

James Nayleigh - Whatocean
In your more serious lines in part B (well, I noticed this overall...but it really bugged me in part B), it sounds like you're sacraficing the emotion for the voice. It almost sounds too flat/monotone to be a father, and it's even more obvious when you're delivering those more serious lines.

Maxi Nayleigh - Betsy
You do mom voices so well! Loved it~

Darick - Koivo
Holy. Freaking. Cow. I LOVE YOUR VOICE. (No kidding XD) It was just AMAZING. And you pulled off Darick so well. The only thing I really want to say is that, your first line sounded really deep...and then your next line was said in a totally different voice...and then, towards the end, I could hear a bit of an Australian/British accent (?). You want to keep a constant voice throughout the whole episode.

Student #1 - Scarlotte // Student #2 - Mochan
Yay!
I didn't even recognize you, Scarlotte o___o

Mark Collins - Whatocean
Whoot, one-liner!

Teacher - Rosegirl18
Nice

Prof. Nuxelburg - HandsomeZelos
This is EXACTLY how I pictured Professor Nuxelburg's voice to be o___o Loved it!

Mixing -
I think there could've been a little more echo when thoughts were being heard. The volume levels in Part B weren't as well done/carefully done as Part A...otherwise, I think the mixing was done really well! I especially liked the range of SFX used.

Scripting -
According to the script, the teacher should be male ("Arla: *sigh* At least the topic’s interesting. He’s not as vicious as he could’ve been. Huh?") So, the script should've been edited later for a female VA (...I guess no one else would really notice, but it was bothering me XD...)



This is my own pet peeve, but the a in "Fa" in my name is pronunced like "ah" in ta ta not "uh" -scampers off-

[Pretty Kunoichi]

Wow, wow! Sounds so professionally done. I'm not too keen on my Esrel part--I sound so...Emotionless! But everyone else was great, this is a really cool production and I'm proud to be part of it.

[Rosegirl18]

Gweee! Oh no, I didn't send in my first line XP
It's wonderful - the mixing, voices, all of them are awesome! Great job everyone ^-^

[Koivo]

That was so much fun doing.

[Betsy]

Great job, everyone!
And your Esrel was fine, Pretty Kunoichi I don't think she needs any more emotion.

[WhiteAsh001]

Excellent job, Masa-chan! Everyone did and amazing job and it was a very pleasant series beginning! I hope to hear more and support you in the creation of more episodes!!

[UltraRob]

Heh. Well engineered and well acted. I liked it!

Rob

[HandsomeZelos]

Wow, I gotta say that was a great 30 minutes! All the characters soung excellent, and the mixing is genuine. Great work, everyone!