[nikoshinigami]

Niko here with the first installment of the accompaniments for the Murphy's Law novel series. This was a bit rushed as I was told by the website manager last night that this audio piece was going to be included in todays update to celebrate the conclusion of part one. As such, this is finished but still very open for criticism and critique as with such little notice, I'm forced to send this in for now and come back later with a final draft with everything roughed out.

http://media.putfile.com/Murphys-Law-Alan-and-Julian
2.55 minutes, 2.67Mb

Big thanks to my voice actors who were so very kind in helping me.
Sukisho as Julian
Shintarou Inuzuka as Alan

[UltraRob]

Wow, that certainly ended abruptly, didn't it?

Overall, it's okay. The sound effects sequence at the beginning after he enters the store is slightly confusing, I'm not sure quite what's going on. Also, Shintaro's delivery seemed a little off on some of the lines.

Sukisho, on the other hand, did a great job.

An interesting start.
Rob

[nikoshinigami]

I feel the same way about that bit of SFX. I needed a sound for things falling down and clattering to the floor but couldn't find one or make one so I tried to piece something together but it's just not really working.

EDIT-
There really is nothing quite like home made sound effects. When the redone version is posted, hopefully the new sounds will make it easier to understand as well.

[Sukisho]

I listened to this yesterday and thought it came out pretty nice, but yeah it does end rather abruptly, that's all I can really say about it. I also thought Shintarou did pretty well.

[Shintarou Inuzuka]

Sukisho- You did a good job on this ^_^ The voice and emotions were dead-on.

Shinta- First off, how the hell did my voice get that high? O_O Also, a few lines, yeah, they didn't really match too well; I kinda guessed wrong as far as how to portray the character. I'm gonna be redoing my lines anyway so that my lines fit the character, so the final draft will be better. ^_^;;

Mixing was also good, though it seemed like there was a HUGE difference between the volume of my lines and the volume of Sukisho's lines (that is, mine were way louder).

[Rabids Squirrel]

Great job by both VA's and I thought th mixing was spot on! X3

Because I don't really know which VA was which:

Shop Owner: I loved your salesman ship sound that you put on! Great for that unlucky shop owner who see's a chance and jumps on it!

Other Guy: You had me laugh a few times before this was over, in a good way. I found your lack of emotion to be amuseming XD You did a great job playing a colder character.

[nikoshinigami]

New file added with redos.