Story Synopsis:

Things get a little out of hand for Majesta when a mysterious white-haired stranger comes to tell her she's heir to the throne as the princess of the "Unknown Planet." Can our heroine handle her worst enemy Kino, school stress, and her newly discovered position?

Omgz! It's really here! Sorry for the wait~!
This is my first shot at mixing, so critique would help a lot more that "oh man, you suck!!" I wanna get good, it's just a matter of learning and improving with experience...and you far more experienced people can really help~So input/feedback is much appreciated.
This radioplay is based on the webcomic which is available online to read for free, and is also available for purchase. The radioplay is geared more toward people who've already read the comic, because it's just easier to follow that way ^^; But if you haven't read it, then it's cool to listen anyway.
I tried to give this radioplay that shoujo dramatic flare as if it's the comic. I hope I succeeded.
I plan on working on the radioplay as long as people are interested in it, and it runs smoothly. Please tell me if you'd be interested in seeing chapter 2 turned into a radioplay~
Anyway, last but not least, I'd like to mention I'm proud to have such a wonderful cast! Each of you are great, and it's really cool working with you! Looking forward to more~! <3

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Stream:

MAJESTY-Full Version
Running time: 7:33
Size: 6.92 MB

MAJESTY-Part I
Running time: 2:35
Size: 2.36 MB

MAJESTY-Part II
Running time: 1:52
Size: 1.72 MB

MAJESTY-Part III
Running time: 3:36
Size: 2.84 MB

I'm currently looking for space to upload the files for download. If anyone wouldn't mind hosting the files, please PM me <3
(Visual Credits file coming soon!)

Cast
Ayumi-chan- Majesta Sudaka
Matt Alan- Kino Arai
Klepto Bysmal- Takke
Fenix Onslaught- Spylite
enchantma- Nirei
Zakuro- Teacher
Topleka- Mom/Mrs. Sudaka



BGM List
Opening Theme- Endless Sorrow A Agressive Mix by Ayumi Hamasaki
Ending Theme- Love Shine from DDR Extreme Sounds of Nature Piano Solo
Prince of Persia 2 OST
Revolutionary Girl Utena OST
Advent Children-Tifa's Theme
Tengoku to Jikogu with a Rock-Peace Maker Kurogane OST

SFX source
sounddogs.com
ljudo.com
HUGE thanks to Brizz and Cleo who provided me with SFX and BG music...Couldn't have gotten through that without you guys!

And..here is my review~
Ayumi-chan- Every moment I worked on the mixing, I loved you as Majesta more and more. Your voice really suits her, and her line quality is amazing~The acting is great too! There were times I felt you could've been a little bit more dramatic and had an opening to overreact, but all in all, you did a super great job, and I can't wait to hear you next chapter!
Matt Alan- I really liked your acting! You got Kino's attitude dead-on~
Klepto Bysmal- Nice job, Klepto. I like your voice and acting! Takke doesn't get that much of a role here, but I'm looking forward to chapter 2~ I'd like to hear the three main characters interact with eachother =3
Fenix Onslaught- One line, but the best one line I've heard XD Good job to you <3
enchantma- *cough* I can do better T__T Not too happy with my voice...I'm gonna work on that...
Zakuro- Your voice is awesome, and I love what a great job you did! That cold tone is great 8D
Topleka- I like your voice in this role a lot! Your expression was so perfect, too! I didn't have to correct anything =3 Can't wait to hear more of you in chapter 2 as well!

Great job to all of you <333 I really had fun, and I'm looking forward to more~Keep up the great work!

[yukie]

This is awesome! *is listening now* I'm loving it already x_x I'll do a review on it tomorrow morning after I listen to it again xD

[PhotoShopTimeRyan]

Good stuff, gets me motiviated to work on the side stories in my web-comic for mediums like radio.

The mixing was excellent in my opinion.

I like how some actions that you can't easily do in an audio enviroment were done with quick explanation, "Did he just kiss me?" and all that.

Again, great job. I think I'll even go through your web-comic when I get a chance.

[samrin]

Oh-my-gosh! It's out! Yay! xD

Okay-- well I suck at reviews and I'd be repeating myself if I did individual ones because I really did love them all! The acting was wonderful-- Mr.MattAlan did an aaawweesome Kino for sure! <3 *is a Kino fan, eep* Ayumi-chan did a wonderful job, great acting and I agree that her voice really fit her! Klepto was adorably awesome here tooo~ <3 Ahh-- I told you I'd be repeating myself since everyone did a marvelous job!

Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter! =D Great job everyone! Keep it up! <3

[Kitty]

Yay!! It sounds soo amazing. I feel special being able to have been in this. ^^!

Critique

Ayumi-chan/Majesta: Wow..Your voice was so cute! I feel mean yelling at you. ._.'
Matt Alan/Kino: I really liked your performance here. ^^! Your voice really seemed to fit into Kino's character.
Klepto Bysmal/Takke: That was so good. ^^! I can't wait to hear more next chapter!
Fenix Onslaught/Spylite: Even though it was only one line, it was still a totally good line! ^^!
Enchantma/Nirei: What are you talking about? I think it was perfect. ^^! So cute.
Zakuro/Teacher: Eh..I don't think I did this well here. I could have used more emotion?
Topleka/Mom: Aww, that was so adorable! You really sound great in this character.

Overall, I think it was so awesome! I'm so putting this on my Ipod. =3

[Yugure]

gahhh... *cries* putfile hates me.. is there a way you could email them to me? I promise I'll leave everyone a critique!

altosaxbandiedusk@yahoo.com

Originally Posted by Yugure

gahhh... *cries* putfile hates me.. is there a way you could email them to me? I promise I'll leave everyone a critique!

altosaxbandiedusk@yahoo.com

No prob! I'll send you the full version in one e-mail~I'll also get on to recording your lines~

Thanks everyone for the comments so far~I appreciate the feedback!

[Windy*]

Yay, first chapter! Review time~


Majesta - the voice and pitch were good, but your acting fell flat during crucial comedic and dramatic points. I wasn't really convinced when you were supposedly angry or upset about something. Luckily this can be worked on and just comes with practice. You just need more variety in your performance... ^^;

Kino - Probably my favorite in this whole clip. XD Your acting was the best here, IMO, and the most natural-sounding as that typical antagonistic male classmate.

Takke - Pretty much how I imagined him. I like the smooth voice you've got goin' on, it really does suit him. Not much to go off, but keep it up. ^^

Teacher - Er, a little forced-sounding. XD Like not naturally stern, but you were trying really hard to sound like it. It might just be because of your age, or not being used to doing as many adult roles...

Nirei - Well, it fit the part. I couldn't hear you too well, but I like your voice, so you sounded nice. =3! Maybe more dramatic emotions, though.

Mother - Whoo Topleka. XD Again, not much to go off, but you sounded... motherly?

Spylite - Hot one-liner! lmao. You sounded almost sarcastic, but I dunno if that was intentional. XD


The mixing was pretty good; not sure about music choices, but some BGM sounded very nice. The SFX differed in quality at times, but it is hard to find everything in high-quality. x_X Nice panning, too.


Keep up the nice work, everyone~ looking forward to more. <3

[Brizz]

Originally Posted by Yugure

gahhh... *cries* putfile hates me.. is there a way you could email them to me? I promise I'll leave everyone a critique!

altosaxbandiedusk@yahoo.com

o.o OMG, IT'S OUT!

But...

T.T Enchantma, me too.... somehow putfile closes every single internet window I have when I open it...

mazokugirl@hotmail.com

Or you can easily put it on a host linky, like yousendit (you have to register though), megaupload (most people hate that though), sendspace.. uhhh... acutally I could do that for you if you don't mind. xD

Oh and Tengoku to Jikogu with a Rock is acutally from the Peace Maker Kurogane OST xD