FINALLY. I HAVE ONE OF THESE.
Please enjoy my obvious advertisement for fake products.
Mixing&Editing .. Austin Matthews
Script&Layout .. Patrick Seymour
All the thanks to those who helped make this happen!
Comments and critiques are welcomed.
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FINALLY. I HAVE ONE OF THESE.
Please enjoy my obvious advertisement for fake products.
Mixing&Editing .. Austin Matthews
Script&Layout .. Patrick Seymour
All the thanks to those who helped make this happen!
Comments and critiques are welcomed.
Last edited by ichigoxcupcakes; 08-22-2012 at 05:49 AM.
I loved you're 2nd, 4th and 6th deliveries the most. Thought they were captivating and interesting.
The 1st and 3rd my only problem with them is while they had a professional tone, I would've had a slight inflection change when you got to the second half of the lines rather than keeping them in the same tone. Just an extra bounce of energy on "Well you've come to the right place", and "Now with new hipster style glasses?", it just gives a bit more personality to the delivery.
Good stuff tho~
Thank you hyperknees91, your critiques are always great~
I understand what you are saying completely; I'll take that into consideration for the future! : )
Bump for today~!
Thanks once again!
Bump for the day : )
I remember commenting on Youtube but I'll just repeat for the hell of it!!!! For an advertisement of fake products,you did a very good job.
Holy crap....now I want chocolate....and mango...ffff stop selling me things!
But really. a good portion of it I was entranced and literally wanted the product or was very interested in what it was you were promoting.
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