[Zozomon] Final Fantasy X Demo Reel

[Zozomon]

I thought that I would post this since i am auditioning for a ffx project at the moment. Why not make a reel out of it : )
Critiques are much appreciated, as well as a look at the channel : P

[finalCrystine]

Yuna - Your voice is the closest to the original I have ever heard. I loved your first line, the second line was less believable. It was kind of slow and the lines didn't connect as much. It sounded like you focused too much on the voice.
Rikku - This one was really good. Your voice suits her nicely and you captured her energy well at times (the al bhed line lacked it though)
Lulu - My least favorite - Your voice doesn't fit her as it sounds too young.
Forgot the name xD - No complaints about this one
Dona - Love the tone you used for her. Delivery was good with the exception of: what would you think, if I was giving up my pilgrimage. This line sounded too forced and not natural.
Forgot her name xD - I remembered her voice instantly when you started talking. It sounds pretty alike. Also no complaints about the delivery
Yunalesca - Not as natural as your other characters. It sounded robotic at times, as if you focused too much on the pacing of the line.
Lucil >.< - I like your take on her!
Belgamine - Too much emphasizing on some words for my liking. But other than that it's good.

Overall - Great variety in the voices and the recordings were clear. If I were to judge I would at least have given you a part in the dub.

[Zozomon]

Thank you very much for this critique, I was interested to see what people thought of my Lulu, i really want to perfect it! Perhaps when I get a little older i may be able to grasp it better! Yes i did notice after a while the lines are very slow. I'll be honest, i was using the pacing of the lines coming up on the screen to read ^^'' But thanks for your advice i really appreciate it
P.s I never knew speaking al bhed would be so hard, ill have to keep practicing