[BGP] Naruto Shippuden - "All of Your Jutsu Are Useless" FANDUB

[UchihaProject]

Naruto Shippuden
"All of Your Jutsu Are Useless"




Directed By: UchihaProject
Mixed By: UchihaProject
Script Adaptation By: UchihaProject

Itachi Uchiha - LordCrehavos9000

Orochimaru - JarvisTheNinth

Pain - Darknezz

[finalCrystine]

Nice work on this clip ^^
Pain - I'm not really sure what to think of it. On one hand I like it, but on the other I feel the delivery misses something.
Orochimaru - sounded creepy, so good work xD
Itachi - I really liked it; I think this voice suits him well, plus the delivery was good.

Mixing - It's something small, but something to watch out for. When you used the sound effects from the snake part the music in the clip was different from what you had in the beginning and so it had a noticible transition.

[hyperknees91]

Pain- Not quite a deep enough voice, but not really distracting enough for the one line. It fit in well for what it's worth.

Orochimaru- Hmm I think a bit too much emphasis was put on the voice and not enough on the acting. I would hold back on the snakey texture ever so slightly and would've focused more on his obsession with the sharingan and his fear of it, as that didn't come through quite clearly.

Itachi- I think you needed to speak up a bit more as it was a bit hard to understand what you were saying. Also I think you made him a bit overly creepy, I think a smoother cleaner voice would work much better for Itachi.

Mixing- I think you needed to turn the music down slightly more. And be careful when you're just ripping the sfxs from the original scene as the music transitions make it a bit too obvious (though I know these sfxs can be a bit tough to get ahold of).

[UchihaProject]

Thanks for the critique. I think after making that one mistake while mixing, I came across a few solutions to fixing that problem. I usually only use the original audio as a last resort.

[UchihaProject]

I'm going to give this thread another bump.

All critiques are appreciated.

[thehurricanekid]

"A review a day keeps the trolls at bay." - Me

Review 013
I preface this by saying I've never seen the original dub of Naruto Shippuden, so any suggestions I make are merely what I would like to have seen with the character. If you wish to justify any aspect of your performance with the explanation that you were just trying to imitate the original actor, feel free, but these are my views on what I would've expected from these characters. Orochimaru was masterfully done. I loved the raspy, slithery quality in the voice, definitely accentuated a sort of sinisterly enigmatic vibe about him. One recommendation I would make is to further emphasize a sense of struggle when he's caught in the paralysis. It's possible that Jarvis was trying to convey how frozen and in fact paralyzed he truly is, to the point where he can't even show emotion, but the portrayal there seemed to me to be a bit too stiff. I just would've liked the portrayal to have included Orochimaru trying to break out of his state. Uchiha didn't have that many lines, so there's not much for me to say, but I did like the tranquil sort of harshness you conveyed in the line at the end. That kind of stone-cold confidence is hard to sell without appearing too monotone, but I like how you pulled it off. Pain, similarly, didn't have very many lines either, but I maybe would recommend adding a bit of a breathy quality to the voice to give it a bit more of a stoic edge.