I've been playing around with a few things since signing up, but one thing that people in real life seem to like, is when I read stories. Granted, these people are usually no older than 6 years old, but at least they're quick to criticise if you're underperforming
Anyhoo, rather than my earlier demos being about characters, I thought I'd try my hand at reading a story. I'd love to hear what you think! Please don't pull any punches - I can take any (Constructive) criticism you can throw at me!
Also, if you have a request for a story feel free to PM me, and I'll try and get it done.
Cheers me dears!