
Originally Posted by
Labamba
you're voices are great, however i would like to kind of reccomend seperating the voices a little more.. like the emo girl and the little boy where so close together it seemed like they were very similar, wich they're not the boy is very obvious and same with the girl, however it blurred together. That's just an example of the voices that i cought kind of mixing together.
i fealt like some of your lines could have had more 'OOMF' like dramatic-ness to it, but realistically your lines were dead on. :3