Angel Beats Fandub

[AutomailArm]

This is Cloud's first time performing in anything as Otonashi!! He did a really REALLY excellent job and I'm incredibly proud of him for giving such a natural performance on the first attempt.
Give him a hand everyone!
Please critique and thank you!


Otonashi - CloudStrife957
Noda - AutumnBirdsCircle/AutomailArm
Yurippe - Lieutenant Muffin

Mixing done by AutumnBirdsCircle
Some sound effects were made, others were obtained via soundsnap.com

[Dillon Taylor]

Nice work! Very good mixing and acting all around! Only critique I could offer is that there is some peaking on Cloud's mic but I know that is a very difficult issue to get around and I don't think it detracted from the scene much at all.

Mikel... I gotta say... I love, love, LOVE your performance! "Wanna die?"... sooo awesome.

[AutomailArm]

Nice work! Very good mixing and acting all around! Only critique I could offer is that there is some peaking on Cloud's mic but I know that is a very difficult issue to get around and I don't think it detracted from the scene much at all.

Mikel... I gotta say... I love, love, LOVE your performance! "Wanna die?"... sooo awesome.

That wasn't his fault actually, I had to mix it down 3 times due to mixing issues and size, so the mic quality is lower than it originally was... Dx But thank you! ;D

[Aldrius]

Lovely. I think Cloud has a really good voice for Otanashi. A nice sort of every-man tone. Very calm, and the freaking out felt very natural. I'm not sure what else to say. It's indescribably cool~

Mikel, you sounded great. This was really different for you, and it sounded good.

I wish I had more to say but I'm kind of out of practice critiquing.

[MeroMeroSaharade]

mikel... I gotta say... I love, love, love your performance! "wanna die?"... Sooo awesome.

^ this. *a*

[hyperknees91]

Nice clip mike, was expecting the voices to be switched around but still pretty fitting either way.

I should have told you this before you sent your lines in heather, but I do believe you needed slightly more confidence and energy in your lines. Though it has been awhile so just make sure to practice up again =p

Also too bad for cloud's room echo, hopefully he can remove some of it because it sorta detracted from his performance. Still you have nice energy, just need to play around with emphasis and make your acting a tad less stiff in spots (which'll come with practice) and you'll be good to go.

[AutomailArm]

Nice clip mike, was expecting the voices to be switched around but still pretty fitting either way.

I should have told you this before you sent your lines in heather, but I do believe you needed slightly more confidence and energy in your lines. Though it has been awhile so just make sure to practice up again =p

Also too bad for cloud's room echo, hopefully he can remove some of it because it sorta detracted from his performance. Still you have nice energy, just need to play around with emphasis and make your acting a tad less stiff in spots (which'll come with practice) and you'll be good to go.

Thanks for the critique!!

[AutomailArm]

Bump number 1!

[FanDubGurl123]

this was great Mikel! however. I agree with Paul, Heather lacked alittle in emotion. I mean its like, it needed alittle bit more confidence and energy as Paul said. and your Noda was great! and I liked Cloud's voice for Otanashi, but I dont know of it was his mic or what but it sounded alittle muffled.

[AutomailArm]

this was great Mikel! however. I agree with Paul, Heather lacked alittle in emotion. I mean its like, it needed alittle bit more confidence and energy as Paul said. and your Noda was great! and I liked Cloud's voice for Otanashi, but I dont know of it was his mic or what but it sounded alittle muffled.

Hey Jocelyn! Thanks for the critique~ I disagree with the fact Heather lacked emotion at all, it was just the wrong kind of emotion I think. It needed a bit more confidence, but even so--it was still great~ As for Cloud's mic....I'm not hearing any muffling at all, so I don't know what you mean by that. It would be really awesome if you pointed out any lines that sounded muffled. THANKS AGAIN FOR THE CRITIC!!