[ENGLISH & GERMAN] Infinite Stratos Episode 8 Clip - "Laura's Past"

[GoldenrodGirl]

Infinite Stratos Episode 8 Fandub Clip: "Laura's Past"
Clip of Laura's past as a failed experiment in IS episode 8. I found it a story very close to my heart, being able to get over failure and defeat the first time, but being unable to withstand or believe it a second time. For people viewing this who don't know about IS, I have fandubbed Laura's monologue in English AND German because Laura is German.

This fandub is also quite special to me because my IGCSE German teacher who is retiring next year due to illness helped me finalise and edit the final German script. Much appreciation and many thanks for the past two years, sir.

Cast
Command/internal voice - Laura Looi/GoldenrodGirl
Laura Bodewig - Laura Looi/GoldenrodGirl
Chifuyu Orimura - Taylor Carlson/incorrectbox

ENGLISH


GERMAN


Music - Infinite Stratos OST, Freezing OST
SFX - VAA SFX Library
Mixing - Laura Looi/GoldenrodGirl

Critique is greatly appreciated! I have been learning German for over eight years now, but I have never fandubbed auf Deutsch before~

[GoldenrodGirl]

Bumping this up~

[Stephanie W]

I really like the German version XD. I found nothing wrong with either clip, but in the English one, I couldn't really understand the Internal Voice. I had to play it about 2 times. The one at 1:57 "Do you wish for a ___?" I can't understand the last part. I think the background music is drowning it out or the word is mumbled. I'm using speakers at the moment, so that could be one of the problems? But anyway, good job!

[GoldenrodGirl]

I really like the German version XD. I found nothing wrong with either clip, but in the English one, I couldn't really understand the Internal Voice. I had to play it about 2 times. The one at 1:57 "Do you wish for a ___?" I can't understand the last part. I think the background music is drowning it out or the word is mumbled. I'm using speakers at the moment, so that could be one of the problems? But anyway, good job!

Thank you! Ah, the voice. Well, it's probably because I added echo and layered different pitches, as well as the music drowning it out slightly, sorry about that! Other than that, glad you enjoyed it~

P.S - The voice was saying 'Do you wish for it? Do you want an even stronger power?'