Evangelion Abridged episode 02 [UPDATE]

[Lucisferre]

Episode 2



Episode 1



Would like any constructive criticism on mixing, editing, voice work, writing, etc.

[Lucisferre]

I realize this is on the first page, but its been a couple of days... so bump.

[hadohado319]

Lesbian Russian Spy Akagi.

God dammit. Why does that work so well?

I love it.

Everything else was decent. Having the angel voiced by (what I'm assuming) was the Gears Boomer was a clever insert. Good job man.

[Blackmagebrad]

I liked it, man: a couple things though,

1. Some of the mics had issues, but this is amateur, not much you can do about it.
2. Why is Fuyutski Irish?
3. Some audio balancing in terms of volume needs tweaking
4. Echo effects inside the room with the Eva sounded like they were inside a tin can. A little less echo than that, good sir.

Beyond that, good job: I'm looking forward to seeing more of this series :3

[Lucisferre]

Thank you both for responding!

The gears boomer and its variants are the voice of the angel. Felt it was a good fit. Ritsuko is like that based solely on how she did not care about how uncomfortably close she got to Misato when the elevator doors opened up while wearing a bathing suit.

Originally, Fuyutsuki was going to be a hardened, older war vet type who feels like he should be running the show(not gendo), but PersonINC and I kind of had a falling out, and he had done all the lines with a irish type accent. I'll probably change him back to that though

For echoes, I used premieres reverb, but I guess I'll just use audacitys echo from now on. You kinda get tunnel vision after editing for so long -_-'

[Lucisferre]

처음뵙겠습니다! 저는 영 입니다!

범프!

[ILVGwebmaster]

I'm loving this so far Evangelion is a pretty awesome! Since you're only on episode 1, if you need any voice actors I'd be glad to be apart of this. P.s. I'd be a good Kwaoru ;3

[Lucisferre]

Lol, Thank you!

At the moment I don't have any real plans for Kaworu; just concepts. I might put up a thread for the second episode though depending on my current cast and what might fall through or go through.

We'll see in the next week...

[Lucisferre]

It's been awhile. BUMP

[Lucisferre]

Bump this up