I'm always in the process of recording, trying out new lines, and trying to improve, so maybe I can approach improving from a different angle with your help!
Here are the current Demos:
1. Cartoon DEMO OR http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qNyU1jWbDGE
2. Character DEMO OR http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SkMeiy_y7fY
Each Demo serves a different purpose, the first is more for ranges and character. The second is more fast paced and...cartoony o.O
I took the critiques from the Character Demo and fixed the problems for the Cartoon DEMO (hopefully). Should be interesting to say the least