Mulan 2 Fandub Clip - Losing Shang

[VofJakeHercy]

Mulan 2 Fandub - "Losing Shang"

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Been so long since I actually asked for any input, so here it goes. XD
Did this a while ago, but I felt like I put my whole heart into this one scene from Mulan 2. Losing a loved one is certainly a heavy loss, and when I fandubbed this bit, I pictured myself in the same situation. Redid it several times until I was nearly crying (though I read somewhere that the actual voice actress for Mulan was literally crying when she did this part).
Looking back, I know I can always improve, but it was certainly a step towards something I imagine is the goal. Out of my other dubs, I put the most feeling in this tragic scene and I hope you all can really feel it in her voice.

Like always, I would love any constructive criticism y'all have on the clip. I'm always striving to do better!

[xXPanicButtonXx]

I absolutely love your rendition. You really captured her sorrowful, mourning emotion, and the determination she has at the end. The only small error was that when you said "Shang" when she thrust the sword into the ground, it sounded a little too gruff for her character. Still, amazing job, and keep up the great work.