readers/ editor needed book- Story of voice

[warpig107]

hey I'm writing a book and i have writen 58 pages (may increase) worth of the book, the book is a military book based in SI-FI with the world under attack from a inannament being that cannot be seen, only heard. there is some romance lots of action and a huge mystory. theres a whole host of characters, evil villems of the like, i need people to read what ive written and give feed back on whats bad and good and what parts to improve, things like that, leave a comment below and ill get to you.