Demo Reel Help. Ending a demo?

[RevolutionarySamurai]

Hi guys

I'm developing my demo reel (right now) but I just can't find a way to end it.

any suggestions? I'm trying to think about how to put my natural voice in it also.

Thanks in Advance.

[RevolutionarySamurai]

I've actually finished the orduct, please have a listen =D

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_RMgDe5eKco

[Jinjuuryuu]

That's pretty good pal, there is just one thing that you should adjust... the sound effects volume. What we need to hear is your voice first! Other than that, great characters!