Writing Dump

[StrawberryFlower]

So like I wrote this story for Ghost Shards (my game) awhile ago, but I don't really remember actually writing it. O_oa Hmmmm...

GHOST SHARDS: PRELUDE
Copyright 2012 by Soulforge Entertainment
Written by Stephanie Southwell "Strawberry"

*+*+* Drifting Melody [Aelina] *+*+*

Chapter One

The lights dimmed as a young girl of about sixteen walked upon a wooden stage. Every sound in the room slowly came to a halt, as her sweet smile brightened the crowded bar. Deep inside she was shaking with fear - a feeling that became worse as her lips parted, creating a melodic sound throughout the chilly night air. Her voice was soft, yet powerful.

When the sound faded, there was a long silence before the patrons began to clap joyously at the performance. The girl grinned, tucking her curly azure hair behind her pointed ears. Perking up, she saw the sudden movement of shadows in the background. She tilted her head in confusion, watching the figures leave the lodge. She stepped off the stage, quick to follow her curiosity.

Opening the side entrance of the inn, her search became hopeless. A deep, soft blanket of snow covered the peaceful village of Evertear. With no leads on the mysterious figures, the girl headed home.

[StrawberryFlower]

These three stories below are each set in the same universe - the Ghost Shards universe that is.

Ghost Shards ~Prelude~
[A spoiler-filled story that takes place years before the game]
A collection of stories that reveal the backstories of the seven playable characters: Aelina, Narie, Demi, Kyran, Poppy, Malechite, and Reina. Could give away too much.

Untitled A
[Previously known as Corinne's Diary - takes place over 100 years after Ghost Shards]
A story involving Corinne Rautio, a young pixie/demon moving to the Royal City of Launus to gain an exciting life in the city. She later becomes the lover of Prince Alyster Natheen-Valena - until she discovers he's into Necromancy.

Untitled B
[Suggested by my fiance - occurs 4ish years before Untitled A]
While traveling the broad ocean in search of a cure for his voiceless sister, Seiko Quartz's ship is attacked by sea raiders. Along with the pirate captain's daughter, the two of them are stranded upon an island with no hope of returning home... soon.

[Adam]

Pretty good, it's obvious you're talented as a writer. Only issue I see is that it's far too short. And the latest three you've posted have no links to where they could be read =/.