[4.2.2013] One Piece (Clips)

[Simbaga]

In a world of endless oceans and strange, exotic islands, a Golden Age of Piracy has arisen following the demise of
the infamous "Pirate King," Gold Roger. Pirates from across the globe are searching for Roger's ultimate treasure —
known as One Piece — said to be hidden somewhere in the Grand Line, the most dangerous and unpredictable
stretch of ocean in the world.

This is the story of "Straw Hat" Monkey D. Luffy (Bryson Baugus), an ambitious yet kind and rather dense young
man who has eaten the Gum-Gum Fruit, turning him into a Rubber Man. He dreams of following in the footsteps of
his childhood hero, Captain "Red-Haired" Shanks (Apatheria), by becoming a great pirate. In fact, he plans to find
One Piece and become the new "Pirate King". To that end, he has assembled one of the strongest (not to mention
weirdest) crews in the world, consisting of "Pirate Hunter" Roronoa Zoro (The Pawt), "Cat Burglar" Nami (Simbaga),
"Sniper King" Usopp (Seymour), "Black Leg" Sanji (Kumotoko in clips 1-4, Actorman), "Cotton Candy Lover" Chopper
(Sachibelle), "Devil Woman" Nico Robin (Beckie), "Cyborg" Franky (Apatheria), and "Humming" Brook (Motly Fool).




http://youtu.be/hpuVMCCaMpM?hd=1

CAST (In order of appearance):

Luffy: Bryson Baugus
Nami: Simbaga
Usopp: Seymour
Zoro: The Pawt
Sanji: Kumotoko




http://youtu.be/pNLHPLO3ym0

CAST (In order of appearance):

Usopp (Dr. Usoderpaderp): Seymour
Narrator: Motly Fool
Chopper (Chopperman): Sachibelle
Luffy (Giant Luffy Bomber): Bryson Baugus
Nami (Namifia): Simbaga

Minions: Seymour, Motly Fool, Bryson Baugus


Chopperman Theme!
Lyrics by Simbaga

Time to get up, time to put on my cape
The sky’s blue as my nose, it’s a bright and sunny day
Gotta save the world, gotta keep the people safe
The superhero way

My superpower is my smile
So maybe fighting crime
Isn’t so scary in the end
And maybe bad guys are sad and just need a friend

I’m the one who’ll brighten up your day
And take your hand
I’m the one who’ll sugarcoat the way
To wonderland
Look, here he comes to save the day
Chopperman!


- Special thanks to Sapphire for help with mixing -




http://youtu.be/1TtAjP9twik

CAST (In order of appearance):

Makino: dragonknighttara
Young Luffy: Simbaga
Bandit Leader: ConVito
Mayor: Motly Fool
Shanks: Apatheria
Lucky Roo: Seymour
Yasopp: Kumotoko
Ben Beckmann: Darkwolf

Additional Voices: Seymour, Motly Fool, Kumotoko





http://youtu.be/h2n6-NOmkFA

CAST (In order of appearance):

Sanji: Kumotoko
Zoro: The Pawt
Kuma: Ovarku
Nami: Simbaga
Franky: Apatheria
Luffy: Bryson Baugus
Chopper: Sachibelle
Usopp: Seymour
Robin: Beckie




http://youtu.be/i6rRwtyI3nQ

CAST (In order of appearance):

Luffy: Bryson Baugus
Ace: BloodRedOath
Thugs: Sarifus, Seymour, Edwyn, Actorman
Dadan: dragonknighttara
Young Luffy: Simbaga
Whitebeard, Garp: Shock Dingo

[hyperknees91]

Critiquing one piece is so hard without me being biased xD.

Luffy- I like the energy you have, but I do feel it needs to be pushed forward a bit more. Luffy always seems like he's having the time of his life and that didn't quite reflect here, still it's enjoyable regardless.

Nami- The voice was good, but I feel like all her lines were expressed a bit too softly and as such it kind of lacked her spunky attitude. Also the line "I'm going to draw a map of the entire world" came out a little flat. This is her dream, she should show a passion for it, yet it seemed to be expressed the same way as all the other lines.

Usopp- I like this actually, it's suitably obnoxious and energetic enough and the voice does work. I do feel like the one line about his dream was expressed a bit too strongly (not sure if you have knowledge of the character). Usopp isn't a confident guy, and he isn't sure of himself even in this scene, so yeah the exaggerate insecurity wasn't really there. Still I think that's something that can be easily fixed.

Sanji- Sanji's the cool man of the group, but I think you still played him a bit too cool. Like Nami, I don't think the passion was really there when explaining his dream. A bit more vocal projection probably is what's needed the most, otherwise the voice could potentially work.

Zoro- Man I feel like I'm beating a dead horse, but yeah the line about his dream was expressed in too cool of a manner for him. I don't it's necessary to be bold with Zoro at all times, sometimes a quiter more heartful approach can go a long way.

But yeah I'm just stupid picky, it's still a fun scene so good job on it regardless of what I said xD

[Seymour]

Usopp- I like this actually, it's suitably obnoxious and energetic enough and the voice does work. I do feel like the one line about his dream was expressed a bit too strongly (not sure if you have knowledge of the character). Usopp isn't a confident guy, and he isn't sure of himself even in this scene, so yeah the exaggerate insecurity wasn't really there. Still I think that's something that can be easily fixed.

Thanks for the review Paul
Actually I do know the character Usopp pretty well, and I felt in this particular moment, he understands that they are having a bit of a moment, so he could at least try to buck up some courage, even if it's fake.
I also felt it chimed better with the situation, but to each their own~

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Simby, you know how I feel about this entire cast.
This clip only fuels my desire for more clips...START SCRIPTING!

[Simbaga]

Thanks for the crit, Paul! It's always great to get feedback from another fan of the series. Personally, I have to agree with Seymour and say that I'm very pleased with the energy that everyone brought to this scene. But I'm still very grateful that you gave your two cents, and hope you'll stick around for the real action that's coming up in future clips! =D

And Seymour, you are wondrous and you make my halfro'd, oblong-nosed dreams come true. 8'D

[DovahkiinHelm]

I watch this and now understand why I didn't get Zoro. I probably didn't even come close. This. Is. The Shiz. All of you well done, go on forth to greatness!

[Simbaga]

New clip is out!

[Seymour]

I can't even write a review for this...this is all so good.

[Motly Fool]

I loved absolutely everything about this! Just...everything! These clips are absolutely top notch, and I cannot wait to see more of them!

[Apatheria]

Sachi makes me die of cute. <3

[Simbaga]

Daaaawww, thanks lovelies. <3 Couldn't do any of these without all you wonderful, gloriously talented people. C: