Hi my name is kirk wilson im a young film maker and i want feedback on one of my ideas let me know what you think
They say the house is haunted
Its not- it was never haunted the screams and howls the villagers heard were made by him.
He became a fully-fledged monster once a month it seemed impossible that he would go to school. Other parents weren’t likely to want there children exposed to him.
Then he met a wise man. He was sympathetic he gave the boy hope. He said that as long as they took certain precautions there was no reason why he shouldn’t go to school. The house the tunnel that leads to it they were built for him. Once a month he was smuggled out of the village into the house to transform. His transformations in those days were terrible. It was very painful to turn into a werewolf. He was separated from humans so he wouldn’t bite them. So he scratched and bit himself. The villagers heard the noise and the screams and thought they were hearing particularly violent spirits. The headmaster and his parents encouraged the rumours. Even after he left the village, when the house has been silent for years the villagers don’t dare approach it.
Now his three friends could hardly fail to notice that he disappeared once a month. He made up all sorts of stories. He told them that his gran was ill and he had to go and see her... he was terrified they would desert him the moment they found out what he was. But of course they worked out the truth.
They didn’t desert him at all. Instead they did something for him that would make his transformation not only bearable but the best time of his life they became therianthropist’s it took them the best part of three years to work out how. They were the cleverest students in the school. Luckily they were, because it can go horribly wrong. Finely in year ten they managed it, they could each turn into a different animal at will.
They couldn’t keep him company as humans so they kept him company as animals. A werewolf is only a danger to humans. They sneaked out of the village every month; they transformed and then joined him in the house. Under there influence he became less dangerous his body was still wolfish but his mind seemed to become less so while he was with them.
He let him into the school as a boy and now he gave him a job after he had been shunned all of his adult life unable to find permanent job because of what he was.
After twenty five years of suffering with the painful transformation he finally found an antidote to the pain. The antidote doesn’t stop him from being a werewolf but it makes him safe, as long as he takes it in the week preceding the full moon. He keeps his mind when he transforms he is able to curl up in a house outside the village a harmless werewolf and wait for the moon to ware away.
He thought that he could never love because of his condition but then she came along with her elegant black curls and her sweat smile and he couldn’t resist he had fallen in love. In the upcoming months they kept meeting up casually for a few drinks going out to the cinema and going out for meals in the most posh restaurants they could find until the day when she found out his deepest secret. This was it; the time that he had been dreading how could he possible explain what he was. She was surly going to leave him he was certain of it. But she never left just like his friends didn’t walk out on him when they found out. Instead she did something that would make him the happiest werewolf and man in the whole wide world she proposed to him for all of his faults she wanted to spend the rest of her life with him.
Then it happened one year after the weeding his wife was pregnant. He took this news very badly he believed that he has made a big mistake marrying her he did it against his better judgement because she’s now an outcast and as for his unborn child he’s convinced that it will be like him. How will he forgive himself when he knowingly risked passing on his own condition to an innocent child. And if by some miracle it is not like him then he believes that it will be better of, one hundred times so, without a father of whom it must always be ashamed.
Even his wife’s own family are discussed by there marriage, what parents want there only daughter to marry a werewolf?