Bleach - Hell Chapter fandub: Ichigo Loses It

[Zangya]

After a proximately 8 months....I finally finished this fandub. I would like to apologize for taking so long. One school started back up, I had my hands full and fandubbing was indeed the last thing on my mind. But here it is. I hope you all enjoy it! (:

BLEACH HELL CHAPTER FANDUB CLIP: "Ichigo loses it"

CAST

Ichigo: Sarifus
Rukia: Zangyax
Renji: Convito
Uryuu: James Nickabocker
Koukta: apethiria
Fire slime: Sarifus
Mixing etc: me

[Sarifus]

Alrighty! Great to see this up, and good stuff! =)

Pretty happy with all this voicework, I'll just get into the sfx for now;

I think there's a missing sfx when Ichigo hits the ground at the beginning. Then that wind could be a tad louder.
Apatheria's first line is a tad quiet, in comparison to my breathing which seems a tad loud.
Koukta's hand touching the sword handle makes quite a big metallic noise that's been turned down - I would instead try using a sound effect that's slightly less aggressive. Leather or something, just for his hand gripping the handle. The sounds after that of him pulling the sword sound great to me.
The big sword swing after that, there's some low rumble that's very loud. So I'd turn that one down a bit.
At 2:20, Apatheria's line splices in a tad too quickly from the previous line. If you can add a tiny bit of extra space before that, maybe by moving the previous section of dialogue back or that section a tiny bit forward.
Rukia's first lines are a bit too loud, same goes for the sfx when Koukta hits her.

I believe that's all for levelling!

[Zangya]

bump
re-mixed

[Apatheria]

Fun little clip! Very dramatic. :v

It was nice to hear Sarifus using his more youthful range; I don't get to hear it very often, and it's quite convincing. The other characters all sounded rock solid as well; no real complaints in the voiceover department.

I don't have a whoooole lot of know-how when it comes to audio mixing, but the clip sounded believable for the most part. The audio issues Sarifus pointed out earlier all seem to have been resolved, so cheers in the mixing department as well!

Overall, very nice little fandub. Thanks for involving me; Koukta was incredibly fun to play.

[AutomailArm]

BUMP! Critique will come soon~~