Genesis Avalon - Episode One!

[GenesisAvalon]

Hey, there, everyone! HERE IT IS! I FINALLY HAVE GENESIS AVALON, EPISODE ONE! It's a doozy, but, then again, I'd like you to think of this as the pilot episode - it has to be longer than the other episodes in the series because I had to do a lot of setup. Once again, I've got the link and information about the Prologue on here, then the info for Episode One will follow. I would appreciate reviews IMMENSELY... that, and... well... I'd love to build a fan base. That would just be plain awesome.

EDIT: Forgot something big - This shit is COPYRIGHTED!

Genesis Avalon - COPYRIGHT 2005 Kathryn Peets

Pretty much. No touchie da storyline.

Well, here we go! First, the Prologue of Genesis Avalon:

DOWNLOAD:

Genesis Avalon - The Prologue

File Type: MP3
File Size: 17.8 MB
Duration: 19:27

And now, onto the cast of the Prologue, in order of Appearance:

Jaina Masterson/Genesis Avalon: Laura Post
Noir: Hawkeye_GGK
Natalie Hall: Michelleann
Zee Lewis: Iscabibble
Dr. Matthews: Lee Ann Brown - Literally, MY MOM (Sudden cast change)

Music:
My December - Linkin Park
Stay With Me(Unlikely) - Celldweller
Switchback - Celldweller
Indulging Drowning - Crono Cross OST
Then The Morning Comes - Smashmouth
A Parting Day - Ayashi no Ceres OST
Tsuki no Ie - Outlaw Star OST
Bittersweet Symphony - Verve
Under My Feet - Celldweller


*NEW!*

Genesis Avalon: Episode One

DOWNLOAD:

PART A:
Genesis Avalon - Episode One: Part A

File Type: MP3
File Size: 13.5 MB
Duration: 14:08

PART B:
Genesis Avalon - Episode One: Part B

File Type: MP3 (Guess what? Freewebs sucks so HARD that I had to change to FileFront because of the Freewebs webspace problems! God, this is why I wrote the scripts MUCH smaller in the future. Oi. Sorry. Won't happen again. And hopefully I'll fix this within a few days. Sorry!)
File Size: 18.4 MB
Duration: 19:15

CAST OF EPISODE ONE, In order of appearance:

Noir: Hawkeye_GGK
Jaina Masterson/GenesisAvalon: Laura Post
Zee Lewis: Aurianna
Victim: Songbird, AKA "Susa"
Demon: Matt Alan
Julian Alexander: Hisoka
Assara Templari: Genesis Avalon
Roxanne Dawes: "Nell," AKA Aden
Natalie Hall: Michelle Ann
Tanya Laramie: Tris-chan
Obsidian: ClymAngus

Music:

Jing Ling (Karaoke) - Spriggin OST
Passive - A Perfect Circle
Engel - Rammstein
Happy? - Mudvayne
The Scientist - As Recorded By Trevor Childs (A personal friend at college)
Pulse - Macross Plus OST - Sung by Arai Akino
Mad World - Gary Jules
Twilight Suzuka's Theme - Outlaw Star OST
Dearest - Ayashi no Ceres OST
The Chaser At the Gate of Dawn - Ayashi no Ceres OST
The Celts - Enya
No Reward Needed - Ayashi no Ceres OST
Dragula - Rob Zombie
Throbbing In the Moonlight - Ayashi no Ceres OST
Switchback - Celldweller



SFX: Credit to Sounddogs.com

Listen and PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE review! I need any comments I can get!

And as we get some reviews, I will be posting my own reviews of the cast! ^_^

[ClymAngus]

Nice bit of work, flowed well didn't feel rushed which is good. Cast did a good job. A good start to what I hope will be a long series

[michelleann]

Sooo very cool. Great job everyone!

[Cefaclor]

Yep, just heard. Great acting everyone. I dont really have any critiques here since I cant remember whos voiced what character XD.
Although, I think the one performing the rendition/ song should've been a little more obnoxious and out of tune. Would've been hillarious.
The talking cat was really cool, but his lines should've been way louder, I cant hear it at all. Its like mumbles or something. Laura Post did an amazing job overall in performance.

Lol. Your mom rocks. XD I like her prosody. Everything she says is so..emphasized and varied in pitch in the right places XD

[Hawkeye_GGK]

I think Laura did amazing and everyone else was very good too. I'm still extremely displeased with my part because it seems I have to basically scream into my mic to get any sort of decent sound level. T___T

I'm doing more and more of the sucking on these things, but I think it was mixed well with some great background music too (Like the Chrono Cross piece you stole from me XD ). The only thing I have to say about it is that I think maybe the inner monologue by Jaina should have had some sort of effect to differentiate it from her normal speech. They both sort of "Ran into" each other towards the end there.

Lovin' it and I'll send more with hopefully better sound next time. X_x;;

[Trent]

Absolutely beautiful, Kat!!! The sound was clean and crisp. The BGM fit nicely, was not overpowering, and helped with the transitions. The pacing was perfect. And most importantly, I did not get bored for even an instant with the story! Yay!!!

Laura's performance is flawless.

Hawkeye's Noir surprised me as it was not what I had expected, but he fits the character perfectly. Hard to hear at times though.

Lee Ann Brown gave a great performance, but her lines are muddy in comparison with the rest of the clip... which is a little bit distracting since the rest of the audio is so clean.

And you can make all the others just as long as far as I'm concerned because...

I did not get bored for even an instant with the story! Yay!!!

[Batgirl]

The mixing was quite excellent, except as some people mentioned Noir needs his volume upped a bit.

I was surprised that even with the use of music that had words in the background, it wasn't distracting from what was being said.

The cast was really good, I loved your mom. ^_^ Listening to me sing Celldweller was messed up though. (Not anything you did, I just sound sooo stupid. Not that I was trying to sound good.)

Anyway, It didn't bother me that it was 20 minutes at all. So there ye go. <33

Keep up the good work!

And everyone who complimented me, ^^' Quit flattering me or BoB is going to get out of control. (IE: Thank you.)

[GenesisAvalon]

*BLUSHES LIKE SHE HAS NEVER BLUSHED BEFORE*

WOW...

I'm so shocked you all like this.

This is the first time I've EVER mixed anything as big as a radioplay. I'm glad the music wasn't distracting.

And YEAH... the problem with my mom's lines was that she recorded it on the crappy mic on the home computer after I got to college, so, from now on, when Dr. Matthews comes back, she'll be recorded on my spiffy mic for my laptop. So, yeah, she should sound better when she moves to New York.

And Laura, we're allowed to flatter you. You kick ASS as my Jaina. ^_^

And the whole point of you singing Celldweller was to SOUND stupid.

Chris, you and I need to have a talk about your mic anyway. I just haven't been online or home.

But, that's besides the point.

Once again, THANK YOU SO MUCH for the reviews, guys, and I hope to get some more before Ep. 1 comes out!

[Hawkeye_GGK]

I'm in the process of downloading part A right now, but part B isn't working for me for some reason. T____T

[GenesisAvalon]

Part B isn't working because Freewebs SUCKS AND WON'T LET ME UPLOAD IT! So, I'm in the process of editing the above thread with a new link from megaupload til I can fix this tomorrow. So, gimme, like, five minutes, and it'll work fine. ^_^