Law Of Ueki Clips (Clip 3: Ai's Plan Available)

[Soulgig]

Here are some good ole clips on the crazy anime Law Of Ueki.

Hanon's Dream


Clip 1 Cast:
Ai Mori: 11linda
Hanon: Soulgig
Seiichiro Sano: Soulgig
Rinko Jerrard: 11linda
Kosuke Ueki: Soulgig


Crazy Daydream


Clip 2 Cast:
Man 1: Soulgig
Ai Mori: 11linda
Kosuke Ueki: Soulgig
Man 2: GreenCaffeine

Ai's Plan


Clip 3 Cast:
Ai Mori: 11linda
Kabara: Jim Nickabocker
Rinko Jerrard: CarissaM
Inumaru: Soulgig
Kosuke Ueki: Soulgig
Announcer: Original Dub

Critiques are appreciated!

[Soulgig]

Bumping up for Clip 2.

[hyperknees91]

Wow Law of Ueki clips, didn't expect that.

Hanon- Good tone of voice for the character, there was some minor slurring so watch your diction. The performance was a bit one-note for me, I felt like you could've played around with your lines a bit more as I never saw you make any clear inflection changes. This makes the character come off rather dry, I figure you're trying to capture his eccentric attitude without making him too exaggerate though. The final lines before he shoved Ai off a cliff would've been quite effective if he had carried a darker, more sinister approach.

Ueki- Once again voice ain't too bad, but the performance needs a bit more energy. Ueki's rather aloof and sometimes kinda mellow, but you need to push it a bit more as he can sound a bit dull otherwise. Speak up a little when acting him out, I think it'll really make a big difference.

Ai- Nice voice and good energy overall. Though it fit in with the character quite well. There were a few times where the emotions were a little too held back (maybe afraid of being too exaggerate or loud?) but it was mostly very pleasant to listen to. Nicely done~

[Soulgig]

Wow Law of Ueki clips, didn't expect that.

Hanon- Good tone of voice for the character, there was some minor slurring so watch your diction. The performance was a bit one-note for me, I felt like you could've played around with your lines a bit more as I never saw you make any clear inflection changes. This makes the character come off rather dry, I figure you're trying to capture his eccentric attitude without making him too exaggerate though. The final lines before he shoved Ai off a cliff would've been quite effective if he had carried a darker, more sinister approach.

Ueki- Once again voice ain't too bad, but the performance needs a bit more energy. Ueki's rather aloof and sometimes kinda mellow, but you need to push it a bit more as he can sound a bit dull otherwise. Speak up a little when acting him out, I think it'll really make a big difference.

Ai- Nice voice and good energy overall. Though it fit in with the character quite well. There were a few times where the emotions were a little too held back (maybe afraid of being too exaggerate or loud?) but it was mostly very pleasant to listen to. Nicely done~

Haha. That's me going off the beaten track of the usual stuff.
Yeah Hanon was a tough choice for me to go for. I decided to play on his childlike mindset since he doesn't really hold any ill will really, but he's just kinda bored and following a twisted sort of logic. Yeah diction can still be a problem that I need to work on for some letters.
And yeah to Ueki too. I've placed him in my extreme lower range that I don't really use much so I may lighten him up so I can express more emotion without being too out of voice or just practice a bit more.

Thanks a lot for the critique!

[11linda]

Wow Law of Ueki clips, didn't expect that.

Ai- Nice voice and good energy overall. Though it fit in with the character quite well. There were a few times where the emotions were a little too held back (maybe afraid of being too exaggerate or loud?) but it was mostly very pleasant to listen to. Nicely done~

This was my first time(s) trying to match lip flaps and I am still having slight trouble with it that I hope will get better with practice. I will work harder on the emotion and exaggeration.
Thanks for the critique means a lot!

[Soulgig]

Bumping for Clip 3.