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  1. #1 Law Of Ueki Clips (Clip 3: Ai's Plan Available) 

    Here are some good ole clips on the crazy anime Law Of Ueki.

    Hanon's Dream


    Clip 1 Cast:
    Ai Mori: 11linda
    Hanon: Soulgig
    Seiichiro Sano: Soulgig
    Rinko Jerrard: 11linda
    Kosuke Ueki: Soulgig


    Crazy Daydream


    Clip 2 Cast:
    Man 1: Soulgig
    Ai Mori: 11linda
    Kosuke Ueki: Soulgig
    Man 2: GreenCaffeine

    Ai's Plan


    Clip 3 Cast:
    Ai Mori: 11linda
    Kabara: Jim Nickabocker
    Rinko Jerrard: CarissaM
    Inumaru: Soulgig
    Kosuke Ueki: Soulgig
    Announcer: Original Dub







    Critiques are appreciated!
    Last edited by Soulgig; 07-16-2012 at 03:00 PM.
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  2. #2 Re: Law Of Ueki Clips (Clip 2: Crazy Daydream Available) 
    Bumping up for Clip 2.
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    Wow Law of Ueki clips, didn't expect that.

    Hanon- Good tone of voice for the character, there was some minor slurring so watch your diction. The performance was a bit one-note for me, I felt like you could've played around with your lines a bit more as I never saw you make any clear inflection changes. This makes the character come off rather dry, I figure you're trying to capture his eccentric attitude without making him too exaggerate though. The final lines before he shoved Ai off a cliff would've been quite effective if he had carried a darker, more sinister approach.

    Ueki- Once again voice ain't too bad, but the performance needs a bit more energy. Ueki's rather aloof and sometimes kinda mellow, but you need to push it a bit more as he can sound a bit dull otherwise. Speak up a little when acting him out, I think it'll really make a big difference.

    Ai- Nice voice and good energy overall. Though it fit in with the character quite well. There were a few times where the emotions were a little too held back (maybe afraid of being too exaggerate or loud?) but it was mostly very pleasant to listen to. Nicely done~
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    Quote Originally Posted by hyperknees91 View Post
    Wow Law of Ueki clips, didn't expect that.

    Hanon- Good tone of voice for the character, there was some minor slurring so watch your diction. The performance was a bit one-note for me, I felt like you could've played around with your lines a bit more as I never saw you make any clear inflection changes. This makes the character come off rather dry, I figure you're trying to capture his eccentric attitude without making him too exaggerate though. The final lines before he shoved Ai off a cliff would've been quite effective if he had carried a darker, more sinister approach.

    Ueki- Once again voice ain't too bad, but the performance needs a bit more energy. Ueki's rather aloof and sometimes kinda mellow, but you need to push it a bit more as he can sound a bit dull otherwise. Speak up a little when acting him out, I think it'll really make a big difference.

    Ai- Nice voice and good energy overall. Though it fit in with the character quite well. There were a few times where the emotions were a little too held back (maybe afraid of being too exaggerate or loud?) but it was mostly very pleasant to listen to. Nicely done~
    Haha. That's me going off the beaten track of the usual stuff.
    Yeah Hanon was a tough choice for me to go for. I decided to play on his childlike mindset since he doesn't really hold any ill will really, but he's just kinda bored and following a twisted sort of logic. Yeah diction can still be a problem that I need to work on for some letters.
    And yeah to Ueki too. I've placed him in my extreme lower range that I don't really use much so I may lighten him up so I can express more emotion without being too out of voice or just practice a bit more.

    Thanks a lot for the critique!
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  5. #5 Re: Law Of Ueki Clips (Clip 2: Crazy Daydream Available) 
    Quote Originally Posted by hyperknees91 View Post
    Wow Law of Ueki clips, didn't expect that.

    Ai- Nice voice and good energy overall. Though it fit in with the character quite well. There were a few times where the emotions were a little too held back (maybe afraid of being too exaggerate or loud?) but it was mostly very pleasant to listen to. Nicely done~
    This was my first time(s) trying to match lip flaps and I am still having slight trouble with it that I hope will get better with practice. I will work harder on the emotion and exaggeration.
    Thanks for the critique means a lot!
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  6. #6 Re: Law Of Ueki Clips (Clip 2: Crazy Daydream Available) 
    Bumping for Clip 3.
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