Im working on a one shot of this series. Its mine first time writing a script so I would like for someone tell me what you think about it and how I can make it better. You might want to watch the show and also recommend this show its really good
High School DxDAbridge one-shot
Issei: It was when I was at the verge of death, I saw it.Her massive breasts (Say breasts while out of breath)
Opening Song
Issei: I’m the main character
Random Girls Students: (Interrupt Issei) Hey
Yuuto: (Interrupt Girls Students) Bitch I’m going to stopyou right there, I’m gay.
Random Girls Students: What
Yuuto: Bye
Issei: (Wait for 5 sec) Do you guys want to peep at girlsagain?
Issei Bald friend: Sure
(Scene Change-Isseiand his friends are peeping)
Issei: What the hell, I want to peep too.
Issei Glasses friend: No
Issei Bald friend: Take off your shirt already! (To the girlwho is changing)
(Issei’s friend lefthim and girls are about to beat up Issei)
Keima: What?
Pissed off girls: Get him!
Keima: What the fuck!?
(Scene change-Isseiis hanging out with his two friends)
Issei: I don’t know. (In his head: Huh, my plot senses aretingling) Who’s that?
Issei Glasses friend: Oh that’s Rias Gremory
(Rias fart interrupthim then silence for 10 sec)
Issei: OOOOOOkay.
(Scene change-At theroom where Akeno and Rias)
Akeno: Um ma-am?
Rias Shut up I know
(Scene change-At thebridge with Yuuma)
Yuuma: Let’s go out
Issei: Bitchen
(Scene change-Walkingto school. Introduce girlfriend to his friends)
Issei: Female bitch these are my male bitches. Male bitchesshe is my female bitch.
Yuuma: Hi
Issei: I need to do some main character things with my newbitch, bye
Both Issei’s friends: That’s supposed to be our job.
(Scene change-At thebridge with Yuuma)
Yuuma: Let’s go on a date
Issei: Bitchen
(Scene change-Isse iswaiting for his girlfriend)
Issei: (In his head: Where is she?)
(A random girl gaveIssei a paper)
Random girl: No givey backsey’s
Issei: (In his head: Damn it not again. At least it’s not akid this time.)
Yuuma: Hi, are we going to start the dating montage, now?
Issei: No we’re going to skip to the end.
Yuuma: What?
(Scene changeinterrupts Yuuma-They're at the park together)
Issei: Hell yeah holding hands likes a boss.
Yuuma: I got a surprise for you
Issei: Oooo I love surprises
(Yuuma transformingscene to a fallen angel)
Yuuma: Scared?
Issei: Actually I’m more aroused than scared
Yuuma: Well like my dad always say let them die with a boner
Issei: Wait what
(Issei gets staped:It interrupts Issei)
Yuuma: And with that I’m out of here.
Issei: (In his head: Please don’t be my blood, Please don’tbe my blood, Please don’t be my blood, aaannnd it’s my blood. Oh bloody hell,heh ‘’bloody hell ‘’ hahahaha. (Cough Blood) Okay I deserve that.)
(Scene change-to thealarm clock waking up Issei)
Issei: (Gasp) No more PCP before bed.
(Scene Change-AtIssei's friend’s house)
Issei Glasses friend: His videos are so good.
Issei: (In his head: Need to think of a way out of here…… Igot it.) Oh I forgot guys I need to go home…to masturbate bye.
Issei’s bald friend: What the hell?
(Scene change-Back atthe park where Issei got killed)
Issei: All of these scene transitions are me making me sick.
Bad Fallen Angel guy: Sup
(Issei jump away fromhim)
Bad Fallen Angel guy: Was that really necessary?
Issei: No but this is.
(Isseiruns away)
Bad Fallen Angel guy: I guess I should saw that coming
Issei: (In his head: Wait a sec. Why am I running this adream which mean I can...?)
(Bad guy stap’s Isseiinterrupts Issei)
Issei: This isn’t a dream, is it?
Bad Fallen Angel guy: Nope
Issei: I’m going to die, aren’t I?
Bad Fallen Angel guy: Oh yeah
(Rias appears savingIssei)
Rias: Oh I wouldn’t do that, if I was you.
Bad Fallen Angel guy: Who are you?
Rias: Rias Gremory
Bad Fallen Angel guy: Well in that case… I’m getting thehell outta of here
Issei: (About to passes put) Okay what…the… hell.
(Scene change: Alarmclock wakes up Issei)
Issei: Cool I’m naked, wait a sec who’s that? Rias!
Rias: Hi
Issei: Am I dreaming?
Rias: No
Issei: Yes!
Rias: By the way I’m a devil.
Issei: (Surprise) What?!
Issei: Rias?
Rias: Yes?
Issei: Why is this show called “High School DxD”
Rias: Isn’t it obvious, all the girls here have double D’s
Issei: If that’s the case then why is she flat!
Koneko: (angrily) snug
Issei: It was him!
Keima: What?
Koneko: (angrily) snug!
Keima: Oh no not again!
P.S. Keima is KeimaKatsurgi is a character from an abridge series I’m working on
