Im working on a one shot of this series. Its mine first time writing a script so I would like for someone tell me what you think about it and how I can make it better. You might want to watch the show and also recommend this show its really good
High School DxDAbridge one-shot
Issei: It was when I was at the verge of death, I saw it.Her massive breasts (Say breasts while out of breath)
Issei: Iím the main character
Random Girls Students: (Interrupt Issei) Hey
Yuuto: (Interrupt Girls Students) Bitch Iím going to stopyou right there, Iím gay.
Random Girls Students: What
Issei: (Wait for 5 sec) Do you guys want to peep at girlsagain?
Issei Bald friend: Sure
(Scene Change-Isseiand his friends are peeping)
Issei: What the hell, I want to peep too.
Issei Glasses friend: No
Issei Bald friend: Take off your shirt already! (To the girlwho is changing)
Issei: Okay I know what it looks like but it wasnít meÖÖ.itwas that guy!
(Isseiís friend lefthim and girls are about to beat up Issei)
Pissed off girls: Get him!
Keima: What the fuck!?
Issei Bald friend: Who was that guy?
(Scene change-Isseiis hanging out with his two friends)
Issei: I donít know. (In his head: Huh, my plot senses aretingling) Whoís that?
Issei Glasses friend: Oh thatís Rias Gremory
(Rias fart interrupthim then silence for 10 sec)
(Scene change-At theroom where Akeno and Rias)
Akeno: Um ma-am?
Rias Shut up I know
(Scene change-At thebridge with Yuuma)
Yuuma: Letís go out
(Scene change-Walkingto school. Introduce girlfriend to his friends)
Issei: Female bitch these are my male bitches. Male bitchesshe is my female bitch.
Issei: I need to do some main character things with my newbitch, bye
Both Isseiís friends: Thatís supposed to be our job.
(Scene change-At thebridge with Yuuma)
Yuuma: Letís go on a date
(Scene change-Isse iswaiting for his girlfriend)
Issei: (In his head: Where is she?)
(A random girl gaveIssei a paper)
Random girl: No givey backseyís
Issei: (In his head: Damn it not again. At least itís not akid this time.)
Yuuma: Hi, are we going to start the dating montage, now?
Issei: No weíre going to skip to the end.
(Scene changeinterrupts Yuuma-They're at the park together)
Issei: Hell yeah holding hands likes a boss.
Yuuma: I got a surprise for you
Issei: Oooo I love surprises
(Yuuma transformingscene to a fallen angel)
Issei: Actually Iím more aroused than scared
Yuuma: Well like my dad always say let them die with a boner
Issei: Wait what
(Issei gets staped:It interrupts Issei)
Yuuma: And with that Iím out of here.
Issei: (In his head: Please donít be my blood, Please donítbe my blood, Please donít be my blood, aaannnd itís my blood. Oh bloody hell,heh Ďíbloody hell Ďí hahahaha. (Cough Blood) Okay I deserve that.)
(Scene change-to thealarm clock waking up Issei)
Issei: (Gasp) No more PCP before bed.
(Scene Change-AtIssei's friendís house)
Issei Glasses friend: His videos are so good.
Issei: (In his head: Need to think of a way out of hereÖÖ Igot it.) Oh I forgot guys I need to go homeÖto masturbate bye.
Isseiís bald friend: What the hell?
(Scene change-Back atthe park where Issei got killed)
Issei: All of these scene transitions are me making me sick.
Bad Fallen Angel guy: Sup
(Issei jump away fromhim)
Bad Fallen Angel guy: Was that really necessary?
Issei: No but this is.
Bad Fallen Angel guy: I guess I should saw that coming
Issei: (In his head: Wait a sec. Why am I running this adream which mean I can...?)
(Bad guy stapís Isseiinterrupts Issei)
Issei: This isnít a dream, is it?
Bad Fallen Angel guy: Nope
Issei: Iím going to die, arenít I?
Bad Fallen Angel guy: Oh yeah
(Rias appears savingIssei)
Rias: Oh I wouldnít do that, if I was you.
Bad Fallen Angel guy: Who are you?
Rias: Rias Gremory
Bad Fallen Angel guy: Well in that caseÖ Iím getting thehell outta of here
Issei: (About to passes put) Okay whatÖtheÖ hell.
(Scene change: Alarmclock wakes up Issei)
Issei: Cool Iím naked, wait a sec whoís that? Rias!
Issei: Am I dreaming?
Rias: By the way Iím a devil.
Issei: (Surprise) What?!
Issei: Why is this show called ďHigh School DxDĒ
Rias: Isnít it obvious, all the girls here have double Dís
Issei: If thatís the case then why is she flat!
Koneko: (angrily) snug
Issei: It was him!
Koneko: (angrily) snug!
Keima: Oh no not again!
P.S. Keima is KeimaKatsurgi is a character from an abridge series Iím working on