[WBP] Rozen Maiden Clips

[Sayaka]

ロゼメイデン Rozen Maiden Clips

Clip 01 + The First Doll, Suigintou. +



----Featured Cast [IOA]---
Suigintou - xSpadeofHearts
Hinaichigo - Katsu
Shinku - Sayaka

Mixing and Scripting -- Sayaka
[Spade script some of Suigintou lines due to script access complications at the time]

[MeroMeroSaharade]

Beautiful! <3

[Sayaka]

Beautiful! <3

Thank you. <3 Glad you enjoyed it!

[Sayaka]

Suigintou! Bump

[JVSP_The Real One]

Suigintou - xSpadeofHearts You totally captured her dark and evil side. I was able to believe that this character sounded older and maybe has more experience than the other two dolls considering since she is the first. I love the soft sarcastic tone you gave her. Your acting was spot on when you laughed and read that line "But won't that make father angry". The only critique I have is that maybe you could have put more emotion in some of the lines. Suigintou seems very angry and annoyed especially at Shinku. Other than that I loved your performance and your voice gave me chills. Good Job! Great acting ability.

Hinaichigo - Katsu Your voice was so adorable to listen to. You captured Hinaichigo's sisterly and loving voice when she spoke to Shinku. Your performance was spot on and the voice was so cute. The only critique I have is that when she was balancing Shinku on her shoulders, those struggling sounds she made could have sounded a bit more natural. All in all I was very impressed. Great Job. xD

Shinku - Sayaka Your voice was truly an honor to listen to and the accent you had for her was brilliant. I like how strong and bold you made her sound, definitely capturing her personality. That richness in your voice along with how well you interacted with Hinaichigo in this scene was truly a wonderful treat. As far as what I could critique you on, your voice sounded the most professional out of the three but you could polish your acting skills just a bit as far as how Shinku reacted in this scene to when she was fighting Suigintou. I loved how you played Shinku and the quality in the entire scene was truly magical. Thank you so much. I look forward to hearing more from you. :3

Mixing: Pretty good, can't think of anything to complain about.

[Sayaka]

Thank you so much for the detailed feedback, JVSP_The Real One! I agree with your assessment on how I dealt with Shinku's reactions when dealing with her estrangled sister, Suigintou. I had considered making Shinku appear more agitated in her verbal exchange with suigintou, but changed my mind and took the different approach to make Shinku appear level-headed despite the fact that she met her archnemesis...but it came out more dull and not as convincing...XD; I'll keep it in mind for future clips. =D

[LG65]

So... I watched the clip again and here are my thoughts.

Suigintou - xSPADEofHEART

Part of me wishes that you would have been here to see this. As the person above me mentioned before, the acting is there and I thought that the vile nature of the character is very well-portrayed. To be honest, I didn't see a fluctuation in the emotion aspect.

Hinaichigo - Katsu

Who isn't impressed by your take on Hinaichigo, Katsu-chan? I thought that the acting was stellar (as always) and not to mention that it complements Shinku to a grand degree. I have to agree with the person above me though, with respect to that bit where poor Hinaichigo was forced to give Shinku a boost. The grunting did feel a bit forced... But nevertheless, I thought it was really well done. Again... if you were here to see this, Sayaka would be happy.

Shinku - Sayaka

Now... The leading lady. The acting was strong (as always), but the accent that you chose for Shinku was top-notch! I did feel that her personality stood out over the course of the clip. However, in that section that Shinku confronted Suigintou, I do have to agree that you needed to have a bit more ferocity (especially if you consider that both Shinku and Suigintou have animosity towards each other). Aside from that, this clip was really fun to watch!

No qualms about mixing. Spot-on as always!

[Sayaka]

So... I watched the clip again and here are my thoughts.

Suigintou - xSPADEofHEART

Part of me wishes that you would have been here to see this. As the person above me mentioned before, the acting is there and I thought that the vile nature of the character is very well-portrayed. To be honest, I didn't see a fluctuation in the emotion aspect.

Hinaichigo - Katsu

Who isn't impressed by your take on Hinaichigo, Katsu-chan? I thought that the acting was stellar (as always) and not to mention that it complements Shinku to a grand degree. I have to agree with the person above me though, with respect to that bit where poor Hinaichigo was forced to give Shinku a boost. The grunting did feel a bit forced... But nevertheless, I thought it was really well done. Again... if you were here to see this, Sayaka would be happy.

Shinku - Sayaka

Now... The leading lady. The acting was strong (as always), but the accent that you chose for Shinku was top-notch! I did feel that her personality stood out over the course of the clip. However, in that section that Shinku confronted Suigintou, I do have to agree that you needed to have a bit more ferocity (especially if you consider that both Shinku and Suigintou have animosity towards each other). Aside from that, this clip was really fun to watch!

No qualms about mixing. Spot-on as always!

Thank you for the critique, LG. I really appreciate it! <3

[Sayaka]

A little bumpage...