Hyper Japan bump~! \^0^/ (Lol if any of you saw me there or on that broadcast XD)
Damn it, that was an adorably badass demo reel. Keep up the good work!
Augh so much energy! And major kudos for fitting all those voices in there. Like, whoah. I don't think can even count them on my hands.
One thing I noticed, though, is that some of your lines are very clear, which is great, but then they didn't exactly seem to match the emotion of the line. I got the gist of the character and the context but I didn't "feel" it; people don't always talk with such precision. Line 6, I felt you could've risked a little bit of clarity for passion. Line 8, a bit of a slur or drag and slower, more careful delivery can make it sound more suggestive. Line 9, "I can't see anything" doesn't sound convincing. Of course, you could be going for an attention-grabber who lies for affection, but it sounded a little too innocent for that. Maybe a little more hesitation too, if you want to take it a little further. Line 10, I couldn't really understand the context and it was the one voice I didn't enjoy as much as the rest. Line 11 had a great scream, but maybe you could separate the utterances with some more breaths to give it more suspense. Line 17 ("Why are you eavesdropping?") was a bit too over the top. It seemed like you were aiming for snob but flew way over to "play-within-a-play acting". "I don't think it's right... to badmouth someone you don't even know." Just pointing that out because I couldn't figure out what should go in that pause.
I also couldn't really understand what you were saying in the first line... "I'm not some" something something "tiger! I can't stand it!" But I could feel it! I guess there some balance you have to hit. Other than that, though, I really enjoyed it. You're a lot of fun to listen to! You can definitely pull off a wide range of characters and you have your diction down pat. You're a name to look for, I can tell you that.
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