Thread: Bakuman 2 - "Monochrome Rainbow" ENGLISH

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  1. #1 Bakuman 2 - "Monochrome Rainbow" ENGLISH 

    Yay a new song! Yay Tommy Heavenly6! Yay Ribb0ns!
    Thanks to JCx and Incorrectbox for being my second and third pair of ears.



    Vocals: Ribb0ns
    Lyrics, Mixing: TrivialSerenity

    Lyrics:

    It seems that everything is dull
    In monochrome I see it all
    I wish that I could run away and disappear
    It's useless, I hate this, and it's so stupid, I call it quits
    Can you hear me cry into the night?
    I guess you can't

    There's just no room anymore for this pain I feel
    'Cause every single day is a whole new ordeal
    I'm not too sure if I can wait all of this out
    Until a new day can come my way

    I picture a day when we can be
    Both back together again in ecstasy
    Like when everything made completely perfect sense
    And we were happier

    You know maybe it's not too late for us
    And we can both still rebuild all of our long lost trust
    And then return to how we were when I could see more than just old shades of gray

    A rainbow has shown
    You've colored my world
    A rainbow has shown

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  2. #2 Re: Bakuman 2 - "Monochrome Rainbow" ENGLISH 
    Vocals? Awesome.
    Mixing? Awesome.
    Lyrics? Are good, but could be much better.
    All in all you guys did a great job!
     

  3. #3 Re: Bakuman 2 - "Monochrome Rainbow" ENGLISH 
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    I love how well the lyrics mesh with everything! It sounds like the song was naturally English in the first place. Fantastic job on that :> and of course, lovely mixing.
    I'm always reminded of Cristina Vee when I hear Ribb0ns singing that second stanza xD the harmonies! <3

    Good work!
     

  4. #4 Re: Bakuman 2 - "Monochrome Rainbow" ENGLISH 
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    AWWWW!~~~ YOU POSTED IT!!

    You already know how I feel about this, so I wont gush about it again xD

    Lol, I love working with you! <3


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  5. #5 Re: Bakuman 2 - "Monochrome Rainbow" ENGLISH 
    Quote Originally Posted by AstralRain View Post
    Lyrics? Are good, but could be much better.
    All in all you guys did a great job!
    I thought if anything needed to be much better it would have been the mixing, but thank you!

    Quote Originally Posted by JCx View Post
    I love how well the lyrics mesh with everything! It sounds like the song was naturally English in the first place. Fantastic job on that :>
    Thanks so much, Jon! That's definitely what I was going for. c:

    Quote Originally Posted by Ribb0ns View Post
    AWWWW!~~~ YOU POSTED IT!!
    Yes! And I also love working with you. This project was a lot of fun. Thanks for being my awesome vocalist!
     

  6. #6 Re: Bakuman 2 - "Monochrome Rainbow" ENGLISH 
    Amazing job to both of you! Sav, your voice is so beautiful and fits the song so well. Pete, I know how hard you worked on this and it definitely paid off. You're both so incredible! Very well done!
     

  7. #7 Re: Bakuman 2 - "Monochrome Rainbow" ENGLISH 
    Quote Originally Posted by incorrectbox View Post
    Amazing job to both of you! Sav, your voice is so beautiful and fits the song so well. Pete, I know how hard you worked on this and it definitely paid off. You're both so incredible! Very well done!
    If I ever adapt another Tommy Heavenly6 song, I know who to go to for vocals. Thanks so much, Taylor!
     

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