ChronoRabbit's Animation Demo

[ChronoRabbit]

***Updated***
Just put out a new Demo. A gigantic thank you goes out to Seymour who mixed the demo for me.


ChronoRabbit's Character Demo Reel


or via box
http://www.box.com/s/b8vsodjdg6ctzrs9c71q

[Moonvamp]

Greetings. First one, I noticed a big of static/noise from your microphone while you were saying your lines. It could be from your microphone itself, or you may want to adjust its volume to better compensate for the louder lines. If it's the former, what brand is it?

Now, some of your lines seem a bit wooden in overall scope. It's not bad, by any means. In my humble opinion, they could use a bit more emotion and intensity to make the words being utter stand out further. I did like the more psychotic voice towards the middle. It carried more weight than some of your other voices, which, I'll admit and I don't mean to be hurtful, a few of your voices do sound kinda the same. Perhaps focusing on some of the other voices you can do can make you more defined and such. It's an arduous process, for sure, but you're definitely not far off the path. Keep practicing and eventually you'll noticed some significant changes.

One last thing: Was the last voice you did supposed to be an impression of Gollum? If so, I've been told that doing demo reels with impressions mixed in isn't exactly the best move to make since those whom listen to them seem to prefer more original takes. If it's not, however, you don't have to worry about what I said.

I hope this advice helps you in the right direction.

[ChronoRabbit]

Thanks so much for the great feedback! An outside view really helps me in improving. Im taking your advice and I'm getting rid of the very similar sounding clips. I will eventually be adding more to the demo that portray a wider skill set of my vocal range. Once again thank you.

[Moonvamp]

Thanks so much for the great feedback! An outside view really helps me in improving. Im taking your advice and I'm getting rid of the very similar sounding clips. I will eventually be adding more to the demo that portray a wider skill set of my vocal range. Once again thank you.

You're quite welcome.

[Mesden]

First off, that 7-8 second Intro should be cut down to 2-3 seconds. Any longer than that and you're cutting into your demo time. The next thing I would say is that you lack range. All your voices sound roughly the same and that it lacks variety. (It's like I'm listening to your regular voice being semi-dramatic.) The other thing I noticed is that you seem to be over-acting a bit. (Basically we tend to show ourselves off when we're on-camera or in front of the Mic.) This isn't to be confused with 'Exaggerating', think of it more along the lines of what you sound like when you're talking to a six-year-old boy.

[ChronoRabbit]

First off, that 7-8 second Intro should be cut down to 2-3 seconds. Any longer than that and you're cutting into your demo time. The next thing I would say is that you lack range. All your voices sound roughly the same and that it lacks variety. (It's like I'm listening to your regular voice being semi-dramatic.) The other thing I noticed is that you seem to be over-acting a bit. (Basically we tend to show ourselves off when we're on-camera or in front of the Mic.) This isn't to be confused with 'Exaggerating', think of it more along the lines of what you sound like when you're talking to a six-year-old boy.

Thanks a ton for that feedback. I was working on a new demo before I saw this post. In this one I tried to show more ranges with my voice.

[ChronoRabbit]

Any more feedback is greatly appreciated

[ChronoRabbit]

Put up a new Demo.A big thank you to Seymour for mixing it for me.