[Nights!] The Art of Love

[Matt Alan]

The Art of Love
A script by Michael T. Folie


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Original Story By: Michael T. Folie
Script Found at: http://www.perspicacity.com/elacthea...s/pfolie04.htm
Mixed By: Matt Alan
Illustration By: Tsubasa-no-Kami
Length: 3:46
Link: http://www.mattalan.net/ArtofLove/art_of_love.mp3
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~*~CASTLIST~*~
(In order of Appearance)

Voice – Edwyn Tiong
Guy – Matt Alan
Woman – Yagi

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~*~MUSIC~*~
Purcell - Rondeau SATB (recorder)
Purcell – Canon SATB (recorder)

[Koinu]

Downloading.. I'll edit with a reply. XD;

[Kat Avery]

AHHH.



Edwyn - You literally SHINED here, I loved your performance and the delivery of your lines! Oh my gosh, you cracked me up with that whole 'Ooohhh yeah!' line! I love this. <3;; OH, and I loved the "Glorious, Isn't it?" set of lines.

Matt - I loved the entire stuttering, wtf-style way of how you tried to repeat Edwyn's lines. And "pissing irony." AWESOME. I didnt find anything wrong with your line quality like you were saying before, it wasn't any worse than mine. Awesome!

Yagi - You know, now that the linesare mixed in, they don't sound THAT bad. I wish.. I could have pronounced a few things clearer, but eh, oh well. I also sound a bit young, but it's not the train wreck I thought it would be. Yay! Go me!!

WE ROCK.

And Anii. The title picture = Just plain lovely. <3;

[Klaymen1]

Huh. This reminded me a lot of my trip to the Science Center.
Edwyn I think has cornered the market on announcer voices and Matt, you seem to always be in these relationship roles >.> I've read this before actually... And spoiler*

























"I'll show you real art" always stuck in my head as the line leading back to her room. I didn't hear it in Yagi's voice :/ It was more like they are going to another gallery. PG ._.
And other than having to dance to that recorder music when I was younger It was ok. I give it a peice out of pie.

[Kat Avery]

"I'll show you real art" always stuck in my head as the line leading back to her room. I didn't hear it in Yagi's voice :/ It was more like they are going to another gallery. PG ._. .

Really? Oh gosh, for once, my perverted wheels weren't turning at all. I didn't catch that in the line~ Thanks lots though!

[Tsubasa-no-kami]

heeeyy improovment with mixxing!!! i liked the music in the beginning, but the graduation music at the end was a bit odd. just personal test though. overall the sound was good.. there were maybe only a few small parts where the actors were a bit softer, and even then with my headphones on i could still understand x3 well done!

Voice – Edwyn Tiong ~ lovely voice! perfect for the role ^^ i liked the ad-libs! the script was a bit stff in some parts, but you made it come alive!

Guy – Matt Alan - x) good acting!! the one line that was really awesomely funny, i think you glazzed over and the diction didnt come through "VOICE: To achieve this effect. Of piercing irony.
GUY: To achieve this effect. Of pissing irony. " i didnt hear the pissing. x) and a lotts post modern art is pissing! anywhooo other than that the preformance was solid.

Woman – Yagi -lovely voice! good preformance too! x) ehehe i liked your attitude in this, it was like someone in an art gallery who's sick of thier bullshit, like many of my firends can be.

matt & Yagi- i have to agree with the above. "i'll show you some art" could have been interpreted as flirtacious. and you both coudla been a *bit* more flirty. b/c afterall the irony of this is that the guy hooks up with a girl b/c they both hate the art! however... playing it straight and cute as you did... ididnt mind that either. its kinda neat b/c they way the characters are as you both played them.. they didnt seem uber uber out t g et laid... more like confuzzled by the art. and that's peachy by me. just some food for thought *plink**plink*

Overall... i woudl have liked to hear a bit of overlap between the guy & the voice. the preformances were nice, it just neede to go up a notch on the interaction level. and you didnt ned a lot of sxf b/c you were in a gallery.. good choice x3... i think your mixxing all & all is very nice!

Seriously matt.. i REALLY liked this one. x) you haff my approval!

[Zero]

[ClymAngus]

Quck simple effective.

Matt: Well prononced, Or lack of it. Brought the character to life.
Edwyn: Flawless performance as per usual.
Yagi: You have a very mature voice for someone so young. Looks like your going to be giving some of the older female VAA's a run for their money.

Editing, good. Even down to the typically cheesy 2 tone music. Sound effects were well mixed and unobtrusive. All in all. Yay.

[Yoda117]

I thought this was pretty good, but...

the two male characters sound too much the same... one needs to go higher or lower (but only one and not by more than a note or two).

narrator needs to be less throaty... good voice without going for that (although it might have been the result of the mixing, not sure that it was though)

both males need to work on pronouncing their "n"s, especially when an "m" is close in the copy (there was one word... "manage" I think, that really showed it).

the girl was pretty good... the guys were too, but work on that and it'd be pretty sweet

BTW: Edwyn needs to get more excited when he goes into the "awww YEAH!" mode. I think that a bit more energy would really surprise the listener in a good way. It's almost as though this character is also part of the person's intellect... so don't be afraid to get outrageous

All in all, a nice little piece, but try working on those little items and listen to the difference it makes.

*ducks for cover*

[pyromaster]

LOL, this was quite entertaining I must say. The Voice acting was done very well, and the message was conveyed well. Good job to everyone!