[S✿S] Clannad Clip - Tomoyo Vs. Kyou

[Sakura Hughes]

Sakura ✿ Studios Presents You With a FanDub Clip of Clannad

❤CAST❤
Tomoya - JCx
Youhei - ThePawt
Tomoyo - Chinomi
Kyou - Sakura Hughes
Girl -- CiaraUotani
Boy -- Jsteinman

★CREW★
Scripter & Mixer: Sakura Hughes

Feedback/Critique Greatly Appreciated

[Chinomi]

AWESOME.
I'm not too happy with my lines + mic quality... I was happy with them when recording them but now I'm like WHAT ARE THESE. Oh the woes of VAing.

Besides that, this was awesome. I loved the cast a lot and the only small problem I have with the mixing is that I feel like the girl and boy's lines should've been mixed in quieter to make it a little more subtle-- But to be honest, I think that's personal opinion and not really a problem.

So.
Really.
This was awesome. I loved it. Special props to JCx, I loved his Tomoya voice.

[Jin]

Pretty good clip you've got there! I haven't watched Clannad, so I can't give a real critique on this. However, the cast did a pretty good job, and even managed a small giggle out of me from watchng this. So props for that.

Great job, you guys! And especially great job to Chinomi and JCx--your voices especially stood out to me in this clip. <3 =)

[MeroMeroSaharade]

Great job!! Tomoyo was played out so well! Sakura chan and Chinomi chan did such a great job!!!

[Aina]

I really liked this, though some of the lines came out awkward (maybe it's just me). I actually like that the voices tend to boom out, there's been a lot of Dubs I've seen where the voices are just quiet and meh-ish. The voices here demand attention and were played very well. ^^

[JCx]

Thanks for letting me play Tomoya again! I haven't done so in a while and it was really fun ^_^

I really liked Chinomi's voice for Tomoyo and your level-headed-ness was great for the character :>
ThePawt's "well excuse ME for being someone like Sunohara...." line was SO AWESOME. Loved that so much!

A downer was that I could pick out some flubs/slurs of words from everybody that we could improve on. But hey it happens and all we have to do is practice!
It was great that the BGM didn't overpower the voices! I thought my lines were a bit soft in comparison to most of the characters' (couldn't hear a small bit of those reaction sounds) but it's not too big of a deal I think. I think one of Kyou's lines sounded like it might have peaked, not absolutely sure of that.

Overall nice clip. Goo jobbuuu~

[D3mo]

Wow! Amazing job, everyone!

Gotta admit, Pawt really surprised me with his Sunohara. It was brilliant!

[The Pawt]

Mmm~ This came out nicely!

I really liked JCx as Tomoya, you've got a really nice voice, and your performance here was top notch! Chinomi, you grew into the character more as the scene went on, and by the end I liked your overall performance, however... Your first part (Up until Tomoyo shoves the sausage in Sunohara's nose) I wasn't keen on at all. You had very audible breathing between your lines and it sounded like you rushed through all of them in one go, which led to some awkward deliveries and a weird flow in your lines.

Then there was also the part where you went "Don't jump in me like that!"... Shouldn't that be "Don't jump at me like that!"? But like I said, towards the end it got better and overall I like this!

Sakura as Kyou was good, I thought. I'm not a big fan on how you delivered the "...start a ruckus" part of that one early line, but like with Chinomi, I liked your performance more and more as it went on, especially your "BAAAAHH!" xD Loved the energy on that!

Myself, well, I'll be honest. I wouldn't be my own first pick for Sunohara, but I had tons of fun recording these lines and I think it came out really well!

CiaraUotani and Jsteinman as the two extras played their parts alright, but were mixed in way too loudly to sound like classroom chatter.

Overall, I liked it! It was really fun to get to play something other than my typecast! :3

[jerryforreal]

please comment...This was just a draft!...thank you

[~ChibiSammii]

I don't think you should be posting this here...this deserves its own thread ^^