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  1. #1 [S✿S] Itazura Na Kiss - "The Truth" 
    【Senior Year of High School...things will be slow】 Sakura Hughes's Avatar
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    Sakura ✿ Studios Presents You With a FanDub Clip of Itazura Na Kiss


    ❤CAST❤
    Kotoko - Amanda Lee
    Naoki - KampfVerein


    ★CREW★
    Scripter & Mixer: Sakura Hughes


    Feedback/Critique Greatly Appreciated
     

  2. #2 Re: [S✿S] Itazura Na Kiss - "The Truth" 
    The "You love me..." line, as I thought, was impossible to lipsync properly (but it didn't detract from the scene), and the musical cut was too jarring in my opinion...maybe a quick fade-out and -in would've been better?...but this turned out well regardless!
    My loathings are simple: stupidity, oppression, crime, cruelty, soft music.
    - Vladimir Nabokov
     

  3. #3 Re: [S✿S] Itazura Na Kiss - "The Truth" 
    This came out nicely! There were some errors on my part but I really enjoyed voicing this one! I know it's only two people but well done to the rest of the cast and crew! I'll elaborate more if I get some free time later
     

  4. #4 Re: [S✿S] Itazura Na Kiss - "The Truth" 
    This was a really good and well thought out fandub. Sure there were some syncing errors but it firm't detract me from enjoying it none-the-less. Good job, everyone.

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    I LOVE this series! It's not given enough credit. ;-;

    Amanda//Kotoko - I almost think that you overacted some of your lines here, but I LOVED your tone for Kotoko. I just think that a slightly more gentle approach would have been a little better because Kotoko is so confused here at this point in the series. Your lines peaked a couple of times too, but other than that, I loved your voice on Kotoko.

    KampfVerein//Naoki - I've never heard you before and I liked what I heard! It's nice to hear more mature voices! I think some lines had a slightly awkward delivery where you sounded a little stale such as with: "You love me, don't you understand? You won't be able to love anyone else." it sounded kinda emotionless as if you were just reading it. However, I did like your tone and voice on him. I think, and I'm repeating myself here, a slightly softer and more gentle approach would have been a better fit.

    Mixing - There were a lot of hiccups here, and the sudden silence was a little odd where they kiss, however I know that happens in the show, so I guess I shouldn't really complain. X3 If I had been mixing this, I probably would have added a nice little piece of piano music from the OST. I know there are a lot of pretty piano pieces on the OST to choose from so yeah. Also, the foley noises sounded really out of place. They didn't sound too crisp because they really clashed with the sound of the rain which was beautifully crisp and clear. Other than that, great job! :3
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  6. #6 Re: [S✿S] Itazura Na Kiss - "The Truth" 
    Quote Originally Posted by Cydonia View Post
    KampfVerein//Naoki - I've never heard you before and I liked what I heard! It's nice to hear more mature voices! I think some lines had a slightly awkward delivery where you sounded a little stale such as with: "You love me, don't you understand? You won't be able to love anyone else." it sounded kinda emotionless as if you were just reading it. However, I did like your tone and voice on him. I think, and I'm repeating myself here, a slightly softer and more gentle approach would have been a better fit.
    Thanks for the feedback! I didn't know a thing about this series...had never seen it before...so I wasn't all that in touch with the character, admittedly. Sakura asked me, at least with one line in particular, to keep things more matter-of-fact and subtly emotional, so I tried that across the board. I also think that, compared to Amanda's material, mine would naturally seem a little low-key, because she does all the heavy lifting, so to speak, in this scene.
    My loathings are simple: stupidity, oppression, crime, cruelty, soft music.
    - Vladimir Nabokov
     

  7. #7 Re: [S✿S] Itazura Na Kiss - "The Truth" 
    Wow... this was wonderfully cast.


    Amanda//Kotoko - I really like the voice for this character. You gave off a great performance though sometimes it felt you overacted a little bit.


    KampfVerein//Naoki - I have never heard you before, but I was quite pleasantly surprised! I don't know too much about this series, but the tone you gave off for him was absolutely perfect. I hope to hear you around more. It's always nice hearing more people with mature voices.

    Mixing - I'm not looking into it too deeply, but I thought it was good.
     

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    Quote Originally Posted by Cydonia View Post
    Mixing - There were a lot of hiccups here, and the sudden silence was a little odd where they kiss, however I know that happens in the show, so I guess I shouldn't really complain. X3 If I had been mixing this, I probably would have added a nice little piece of piano music from the OST. I know there are a lot of pretty piano pieces on the OST to choose from so yeah. Also, the foley noises sounded really out of place. They didn't sound too crisp because they really clashed with the sound of the rain which was beautifully crisp and clear. Other than that, great job! :3
    Thank you! Yeah, my sony vegas was being really stupid when I was mixing. It kept freezing, I couldn't actually watch it play because the video was slower than the audio due to the lagginess so I tried my best. I agree with the weird silence, xD but I was imitating the original. However, I feel, when it's first silence, it hits you by surprise, but then you kinda gradually understand it, but that may just be me since I love this anime ^^
     

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