Re:Member [Japanese Cover and DAN DAN Kokoro Hikareteku [English Cover]

[Moongem]

Hey! I'm back with two more song! As usual, I ask for critiques and feed back.

Re:Member

I like Re:Member bescause it is my first time trying to sing in Japanese, I'm looking forward to critiques of it! I wanna know how I did.

DAN DAN Kokuro Hikareteku

DAN DAN Kokuro Hikareteku, or simply, Bit by Bit, is a song I recently discovered. It was the english opening to the series Dragon Ball GT and I instantly fell in love with the song.

As always, the song and anime associated with them are owned by there respective owners, I own nothing but my voice.

[SaigoSentinel]

The first thing on my mind was "I NEED THAT INSTRUMENTAL!!!" haha Was it a vocal rip? or did u track down an official instrumental?

Secondly, it seems like you didn't really have the pitches down, like you needed more practice on your Japanese. Also, you sang the harmonies, instead of the melody when it came time for them to be sung. Other than, that, you've got potential, you just need more practice.

[Moongem]

Since you mentioned Japanese I suppose your talking about Re:Member? Yeah, that instrumental was not easy to find (However, now that I have it, I am willing to distribute it. Can e-mail it if you can't find it). Yeah... a lot of those words took me a while to learn to pronounce xD.

When say the harmonies, are you talking about the "Woo's"? If so, yeah, When I re-do this song, I'll probably do those... I tried it... felt weird.

Thanks for the feedback and positive words!

[SaigoSentinel]

If you could email it to IntermineStudios@hotmail.com I'd appreciate it

No, I mean the harmonies near the chorus. In fact, it was

Sarake dase kanjou wo
Banjou no omoi wo

You went along with the harmonies in the instrumental, when you should have done the melody featured in the actual song. It's fine, just remember that it sounds better when you counter the harmonies with the melodies.