8D Woah!! Awesome!!! I'll critique it real soon!
EDIT: Critiques!
Opening Singer: SSSSUPPPPER AWESOMMEE! It was really fun to listen to and it was sang really well

Nothing bad about this one!~
Falis: I liked it!! A few lines were a bit low, but overall, it was great and super awesome!!
Alita: No complains! Voiced out really well and fun to listen to!
Milano: Perhaps maybe a slightly bit more cheerful might be good!

But I was still really sad when you talked because you sounded so sincere!
Dominikov: Really good! Your voice really fits the character!! I like the emotions!
King: Although your voice was a bit young for the king, the emotion was still believable! One or two lines didn't seem like you were in pain, but the ones that did were incrediable!
Joto: Again, slightly young, but somehow fits the character! X3 Very well done!
Ana: Super cute!!! Some lines should be more tough, but it really suited the character!!
Soldiers: No complaints, although the 'what the hell?"s could've been more surprised. :3
Mixing: In the beginning, Falis' voice was kinda hard to hear, and some of the sound effects were too dramatic, or not dramatic enough. But I'm not much of a good mixer either, so no complaints! It's actually really good compared to what I can do XD
I can't wait for episode 2!!! >w<