Michelle Deco - Character Demo (aka michellelenne)

[Michelle Deco]

A link to my character demo: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8On0r...el_video_title

Listen and review! Thanks!

(I'm also in the process of getting a new character demo made, so please be nice) =]

[Rioitz]

Much more volume needed for a couple of lines, I found myself struggling to hear the pair of the lines around 0:30. >.<

Really liked the first few lines you did, but I think you may be lingering on some of them for too long, the last one for example, I counted to last around 15 seconds, and while it was a nice line to choose I felt it went on a bit too long. Perhaps try and speed up the pace to really grab your audience and say "HEY! Here I am!!" with snappy, but no less heart felt lines

Hope this helped ^^ (Other people can probably give better crits than I can though lol >_>)

[Michelle Deco]

Thank you! Yeah, the volume got messed up and I couldn't fix it. Thank you for the honest critique! I'm working on a new demo so it'll be substantially better than this one =]

[fairuza]

I'd have to agree with Rioitz on the volume issue with your lines.
Some of your lines do seem to drag on a bit, so you should definitely keep them short and sweet.
This will give you a chance to entice and entertain the audience's ear.
Another thing I'd like to point out is when putting your demo reel together, you should try and tighten up the semi-long amount of dead space that is between each character.
They'll be more of a smooth and gradual contrast between the first character and the next character, if this makes sense.^^
You have a very nice tone of voice for characters and I thought you did a wonderful job!
Keep it up!

[Michelle Deco]

Lovely bump at 3 in the morning. Please continue commenting and reviewing! I need all the constructive feedback I can get =]

[Michelle Deco]

bedtime bump ^_^