finalCrystine 2011 first demo reel

[finalCrystine]

http://www.4shared.com/audio/ff8GmhrO/Demoreel.html?

And youtube



This is my very first demo reel, so critique is really appreciated!

Mixing - me

Music used:

Naruto
Bleach
Seven Pounds
I am Legend
Dragon age
Transformers
Silent Hill

[Mutilatrix]

This is so good!

[finalCrystine]

Thank you so much ^-^

And let this be a bump. More opinions?

[lapianoman]

You have good vocal range & I liked hearing your "real" voice in the intro. The biggest issue I hear is around 0:21, where there's some plosives going on. Watch your mic placement & use a pop filter. Overall a nice job, especially considering it's your first demo.

[finalCrystine]

You have good vocal range & I liked hearing your "real" voice in the intro. The biggest issue I hear is around 0:21, where there's some plosives going on. Watch your mic placement & use a pop filter. Overall a nice job, especially considering it's your first demo.

Thanks for your opinion.
Yeah I'm aware of the recording quality. I will watch out for my mic placement some more. I'm using a headset and lost the pop filter on there so I have to do many takes before I have one without many sounds going on.

[ProjectTrinity]

I could have sworn I commented on this day 1. D'< Bleh, moving on to a retype, then...

My only thing I'd nitpick would be your creepy-pasta voice at around 44 seconds. The "Everywhere you go" part could sound a lot more creepy-pasta/natural and less distracting with more practice in that range in general. I *think* lowering the pitch a slight would help give off the creepier feel more, but if you want to keep that range, try changing the delivery method. Like perhaps make it sound more innocent/sing-ish. But I digress, I don't voice act~ =p

Everything else was pretty darn impressive, you~ =3

[finalCrystine]

I could have sworn I commented on this day 1. D'< Bleh, moving on to a retype, then...

My only thing I'd nitpick would be your creepy-pasta voice at around 44 seconds. The "Everywhere you go" part could sound a lot more creepy-pasta/natural and less distracting with more practice in that range in general. I *think* lowering the pitch a slight would help give off the creepier feel more, but if you want to keep that range, try changing the delivery method. Like perhaps make it sound more innocent/sing-ish. But I digress, I don't voice act~ =p

Everything else was pretty darn impressive, you~ =3

Thanks ^^
And thanks for the advice. I will definetely work on the delivery of creepy lines.

[finalCrystine]

And a bump again for more critique? ^^

[CeruleanAsh]

I think this is great! Quite a wide range of characters, all very well done. The only issue I heard were the plosives, but someone already mentioned that. I can't say much about that, as I have the same problem quite often. Great work, hope to hear more!

[finalCrystine]

I think this is great! Quite a wide range of characters, all very well done. The only issue I heard were the plosives, but someone already mentioned that. I can't say much about that, as I have the same problem quite often. Great work, hope to hear more!

Thank you ^^ And yes the plosives, I was aware of that before I started recording T.T At that time I was working with a headset without a pop filter and I couldn't move as you would hear annoying moving sounds D= But I have a new mic now. I really have to upgrade my demo reel. It's time for a new one