AxerJ, I like that you got more lines to work with this time around, you're really good in these types of roles! I do think you started off weaker than you were at the end of the clip, but on the overall you did really good I thought! Props for maintaining the voice even on the louder more intense lines! As for AderuMono and Actorman, you both had very few lines, but I liked what I heard! Hope you guys get more screentime in future clips!
All in all, this is delicious and sexy on at least three different levels! Keep these dubs coming, Damaru! <3