MewVenus 2011 Summer Demo Reel

[MewVenus]

MewVenus 2011 Summer Demo Reel!


Feedback greatly appreciated! Please critique

Characters used:
Miyu from SuperGals!
Kirche from Zero no Tsukaima
Hippo and Lucia from Mermaid Melody
Uzura from Princess Tutu
Sailor Moon from Sailor Moon
Princess Tutu and Princess Kraehe from Princess Tutu
Ciel from Black Butler
Menma from Anohana
Shirley from Code Geass

Old Demo Reel Here!

[Stephanie W]

Omg! Someone else who's seen SuperGALs! XD

Only two things I didn't like was the vocals in the bgm :\ And your Ciel.. Iunno, sounded weird >.<. But everything else was perfect tone/emotion from what I could tell C:

I reallyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy like your Shirley voice.

Good job~

[MewVenus]

Bump :3 Would love more feedback.

[MewVenus]

C'mon guys I really want feedback

[incorrectbox]

Sorry this isn't really feedback, but can I be you when I grow up? XP Seriously, great job! You're so talented!

[MewVenus]

Sorry this isn't really feedback, but can I be you when I grow up? XP Seriously, great job! You're so talented!

Aw Well it's somthing, and that something made me very happy haha thank you very much.

[MewVenus]

bump bump bump

[AshawottVA]

Loved the picture. I thought you did very good

[KampfVerein]

Thoughts:

Energy was consistent. Decent range of emotional content. A couple of distracting puffs near the end.

[lapianoman]

You have good character development & variety. The background music was fitting & the levels didn't overwhelm your voice.

Personally, I would have preferred to hear your voice on a brief intro. It's our best opportunity to hear the "real Christina" & it could help land you gigs where a "natural" voice is needed. If you'd rather keep the Miyu intro, I'd try to cut it down to under 10 seconds. The 4 seconds you free up could feature an additional character, or allow for a brief, natural voice outro. Honestly though, I'd try to cut down the entire demo length to be closer to 1 minute. You can easily trim down "Shirley", "Menma" and "Princess Tutu" & still get the characters across. I also noticed some distracting plosives in "Princess Tutu". Unfortunately, that's the risk of using the intimate sound of proximity effect. Be mindful of mic placement & use a pop filter.

Hope I haven't beaten you up too badly! ^_^