Tales of Graces - Confrontation. Asbel vs Hubert

[D3mo]

oh look, Nick pushed himself to record through his cold. and proceeded to lose his breakfast afterwards. yippe

This scene should have been released around september last year I think, but I was on hiatus during that time. and just recently had the drive to record for it.




Cast :

Hubert Ozwell - Underwood1416
&
Asbel Lhant - D3mo

Editing - D3mo
SFX - VAA SFX Library
OST - KiramaruXVI

[hyperknees91]

Heyyyyyy tales games don't have music this good....this scene is now bssss

Asbel- Voice fits in just fine for the design I believe, it's deeper then his original buts that ok. I do think your making your emotions a little too blatant and expressing yourself a bit on the strong side. His feelings were carried over to the audience but I think making him just a tad quieter (unless the scene is highly emotional) brings a bit more realism to the character.

Hubert- Also a fitting voice, cool smart tone works well. I do think you needed to bring about a slightly more pompous aura to the character as he seemed a bit downplayed. Mainly I would just focus on varying your lines and inflections a bit more in the overall performance because it seemed that several lines were read in a similar fashion and it can make the character seem dryer then he really is. Still everything did seem for the most part quite natural so good job~

[D3mo]

Heyyyyyy tales games don't have music this good....this scene is now bssss

Asbel- Voice fits in just fine for the design I believe, it's deeper then his original buts that ok. I do think your making your emotions a little too blatant and expressing yourself a bit on the strong side. His feelings were carried over to the audience but I think making him just a tad quieter (unless the scene is highly emotional) brings a bit more realism to the character.

Thanks Uncle~

[D3mo]

Evening bump

[D3mo]

A nice lil bump

Maybe more clips? haha

[D3mo]

Bumpity bump

[Ramune]

D3mo: Your natural tone does fit Asbel and I do believe you have the right idea in how you're reading (I can tell you're trying to be as clear as possible) and acting. However, similar to Hyperknees, I didn't hear much variation in the motivation behind the read (i.e. straightforward - soft loud, loud, & very loud). Aside from the moments where things were getting hot, that headstrong kind of read wasn't entirely aligned well with the moments building up to the challenge. My advice is to practice backing off from your emotions as well as to consider a different manner of speaking that may differ from your norm. I suggest this because I have heard the same manner of constant, intense reading in many of the roles I've heard from you (like your forcing it - I know you aren't), which could be holding back your growth as an actor. Well done on the battle efforts and your final line was well read too. =]

Underwood1416: Good choice of sound and read for Hubert. I took his calm demeanor and unwavering confidence seriously. There was a line or two that could have been read with a different sort of ending emphasis, but, for the most part, I felt you captured Hubert well in both delivery and tonality. Your take was very much a contrast to D3mo in that it helped keep the dynamics of the scene balanced against his emotional portrayal.

[D3mo]

Thanks for the critique, Ramune!

And I'll give this one last bump

[Yineth]

I'll give it a listen once I'm home >-<;;