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  1. #1 [CIP] Yumekui Merry : A Day Dream 
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    "Yumekui Merry : A Day Dream"



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    Yumeji : Gonax
    Merry: ichigo_m
    Chaser: the3rd23790
    Cat Guy: Genshie

    Extra Cats: Gonax





    Info: After watching the first episode, I was like, "This is a pretty cool animu, I"ll fan dub it!"
    So I gather my lovely friends and they helped me do this! This is now my longest video in my channel, also
    I'm really glad I get to voice a main character
    once again hurr hurr
    but yes please enjoy the video and critique or comment whatever you like!



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    SFX: VAA Library and Orginal Audio
    OST: Baccano, Durarara, Bakemonogatari, and The World Ends with You
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  2. #2 Re: [CIP] Yumekui Merry : A Day Dream 
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    WOW this is really good! It looks professional!
     

  3. #3 Re: [CIP] Yumekui Merry : A Day Dream 
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    You asked me for a proper critique on this so here we go ^_^

    Yumeji- Wow dude, I can tell you really worked on this. The emotions were hard to find at the beginning but later on in the clip you had some really good moments. The voice was occasionally lacking but only in certain areas. A very good performance overall.

    Merry- Very nicely done, you had good emotion throughout and the voice fit the character well. There were only a few situations where she sounded a bit beyond her years but you really drove it home.

    John Doe- Wow Anath this was possibly the best role i've ever heard you in. I very much enjoyed your forceful this-is-how-it-is tone in the clip and your evil laugh sent shivers down my spine.

    Cat Guy- Not as many lines but overall it sounded good, though I had to listen a couple times to get a good listen due to the heavy music during your performance.

    Mixing- This was well done like always. Music and SFX blended together very well and only one or twice was I distracted from a scene by the music being loud.

    I want to compliment the cast on a job well done.


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  4. #4 Re: [CIP] Yumekui Merry : A Day Dream 
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    Very nicely done Gonax, now I'll critique it just now.

    Yumeji - Gonax: Your getting better and better my friend. Your getting better at hiding your original accent. Your emotions were nicely done after the beginning, you just have to work on not letting dip back to your normal voice here and there. But overall I think it was a good performance.

    Merry - ichigo_m: I enjoyed your performance as Merry. It was very genuine yet at points, like Haruhost said, it seemed beyond her years but just by a little bit. But I definitely liked your rendition of Merry.

    John Doe - Anath: Simply my favorite rendition of John Doe, your tone and acting was nicely done. I can't really say too much more besides, nice evil laugh.

    Cat Guy - Genshie: It made me chuckle to hear a new rendition of the Cat Guy, it was nicely done, though you were drowned out at some points it didn't distract me much.

    Mixing - Gonax: Great as always, keep it up.
     

  5. #5 Re: [CIP] Yumekui Merry : A Day Dream 
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    THANKS GUYS and gal!
     

  6. #6 Re: [CIP] Yumekui Merry : A Day Dream 
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    Everyone sounded very good, and the mixing was nice. Only thing I can think of saying is that Chaser should of had some kind of effect over his voice to kind of muffle it out since he's talking through a mask.
     

  7. #7 Re: [CIP] Yumekui Merry : A Day Dream 
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    This turned out really well. There was a bit of peaking every now and again from everyone I think, and the music and SFX were a bit loud at times. However, by and large this turned out really well.

    Cast:
    Yumeji: Its hard not to parrot the others. You are really getting better Gonax, just keep at it! Of course there were a couple slips, but that's something you'll work out in time. I'm really impressed with you lately!

    Merry: Well aren't you just the most terrifying little lamb Merry ever had! Seriously though, yours was a very impressive performance. The voice was kept, for the most part, at a very appropriate pitch for the character and you emoted very well. I thoroughly enjoyed your performance in this.

    The Cat: Was hilarious. Its a shame there wasn't much to go off of.

    Chaser: I'm happy this got such a positive reception. It was a fun role, thanks for having me play the part!



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  8. #8 Re: [CIP] Yumekui Merry : A Day Dream 
    You all did really well here, and the mixing was the best that I've heard in a while. Great job on that, even though the music wasn't the official OST, it matched well and could have fooled me if I hadn't watched the episode previously.

    Yumeji : Gonax > You did a great job pulling off his tone. I just feel that in a few parts you were lacking in delivery, especially in the beginning when Merry fell on him, I feel like the surprise could have had more energy in it
    Merry: ichigo_m > I really love your voice for Merry, and I've seen your work before. Well executed. There were a few parts were you slipped out of character, i.e. sounded a older than what I imagined for her, but you got that gruff, sassy tone down nicely.
    Chaser: the3rd23790 > Great voice, deep, mysterious. Loved it. No real criticism here. Nailed it
    Cat: Genshie & Gonax > Gotta love those cat voices! Nice job~
     

  9. #9 Re: [CIP] Yumekui Merry : A Day Dream 
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    Yeah i tended just to ignored the beginning emotion since I was recording at night and I WAY to lazy to record it again, but I'll try better next time!.
     

  10. #10 Re: [CIP] Yumekui Merry : A Day Dream 
    Very well done! Glad to have watched! ^^ Everyone did great! Of course, it's to be expected. ^^

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