D&D recap

[Dociouspopstar]

When I played this for my players they thought it was professionally and from a game or something done then they heard their character names and were amazed. I was thrilled to do this production. This was a world creation story/recap of the story so far. Enjoy! Please Critique this is my first published editing piece.

Narrator: Gianni Mantragrano

Na'naat: Tomoyo Ichijouji

Music: Broken (durden version)-Instrumental
Link: ccmixter.org

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[ProjectTrinity]

Sorry, I couldn't hear anything past the epic.

(Good job all around)

[Dociouspopstar]

Thank you!

[Gianni]

My last name is actually Matragrano, but, if it WERE "Mantragrano" I think my life would be about ten times more awesome.

This came together really well, I sure hope you contact me next time I can be a part of a project for you. The lines were nice to read.

Oh and Tomoyo's righteous parts made me wish I would stop talking and cut back to her lines.

[Tomoyo Ichijouji]

My last name is actually Matragrano, but, if it WERE "Mantragrano" I think my life would be about ten times more awesome.

At least it was correct in the video. =P Happens to me too, my alias's last name is easy to miss a letter or two XD;;

This came together really well, I sure hope you contact me next time I can be a part of a project for you. The lines were nice to read.

Ditto! I'd love to do another (epic) reading for a game story that's put together by several different individuals like D&D stuff is. 8D It was well written too, so good job on that, agreeing with Gianni.

I think the one thing can do better for next time, Dociouspopstar, is to be sure that the music doesn't get in the way of the voices. The lines were definitely audible, but at times the music got so that it was a little less clear to hear what was being said. Often it's just a case of decreasing the volume a little on the music, but if you're a little more seasoned at audio editing you can try fiddling with Compression, which basically it will do something to the waveform so that it will stand out from other sounds without peaking the audio track (which is what happens when you try to increase the volume/gain on too many audio inputs). That way you can have the music at a nice, prominent level without sacrificing line charity. =3

Oh and Tomoyo's righteous parts made me wish I would stop talking and cut back to her lines.

^///^ Aw shucks. You were a great Narrator too! The voice really did remind me of one of those voices you hear in movie trailers and you had the right storytelling air to it too. (Saying things in a narrator-ly way isn't quite like VAing characters, because a narrator aren't supposed to be particular characters so to speak, yet they are by no means monotone or toneless.)

[StewardsofGallidon]

This is amazing!

I'm so glad you found Runes of Gallidon, and I love this voice/narration piece. I very much like the additional voice of Na'naat and the way you incorporated other mythos elements outside of the Creation Orders - great touch!

If you are able to meet the requirements for submission (please see "Becoming an Artisan" and "Submission Guidelines and Style Guide") and can provide an edited version of it, I would be very interested in publishing this as an official Work at Runes of Gallidon. Mostly, it's a matter of making sure you have the legal and commercial rights to all of the elements in this piece.

Regardless, I hope the D&D campaign is fun (you certainly created a great intro for it), and thanks for visiting Gallidon!

Scott Walker
World Steward
Runes of Gallidon