So excited to see this! Sounds good, too! Really good mixing on this one, although I think the script ended up leaving a lot of extra lip flaps. I also felt the BGM while they're interrogating Ixia was a bit too...majestic-sounding? for the situation. Otherwise, though, production-wise, this sounded really good!
Capensis: Motly Fool You were probably my favorite cast member. I loved the energy and voice you had for this character. Only thing I really noticed that I personally thought could have been done better was the first line, which was delivered like a question when it was supposed to be a statement. Overall, though, nice job!
Baron:Hokage Titan I hope this critique doesn't come off as too harsh. I like your voice (it's nice and rich!), but I'm not sure if it fits this character. I think it's too deep and mature-sounding, since he looks fairly young and easy-going. As for the acting, I felt as if the lines were missing something, like they were said rather than really felt. One thing I liked about your performance, though, was the projection you had, especially on your yelling lines. I think as an actor it's really important to be able to give all of your lines the volume they need, and I know some people do not fully commit to a yelling line, so I'm glad to hear that with you, anyway, that's not the case. So really nice projection!
Ryunmei: Simbaga: I really liked your voice and deliveries for this character, especially when you were yelling at Ixia about your boobs. Sometimes I felt as if your voice didn't have enough power in your lines, though, like in "Would you quit your running?!" and "Well I'm female, so leave it to me!" I can't explain it very well, but your voice wasn't as forceful as I would have liked it to be...it sounded maybe too airy for the character in those instances. Does that make sense? Anyway, overall I really liked your performance, especially the inflections you put on your lines.
Yayyy I did a real critique 8D
Yayyy I enjoyed this clip. What was the girl talking about though that made Ryunmei so mad? Couldn't really make out what she was saying =p
Capsensis- Excellent job Motly, very strong performance overall. Has a lot of fun listening to your character and the voice was just perfectttt.
Baron- Mainly you seem just a bit stiff here, the yells were good like said but once again, your talking in a bit too slow of a manner. I did really like the tone on the last line though, well done there~
Ixia- Really fitting voice and really great performance overall. Lots of energy and I really can't find much to fault in anything that I heard. Wonderful Job~
Ryunmei- I really liked how comical your character was when she got mad, and how serious you made her towards the end. Though every line before that seemed a bit soft and lacking in confidence. Voice wise it was along the same lines, just a bit too soft and womanly towards the beginning. A stronger tone though would make it perfect~
@Ayame: Well I thought it was sort of a majestic sound in the original so I tried to find something with the same feeling, since I couldn't ever get a hold of the OST for this, though it's been out for a few years now >_<
@Hyperknees: Well the only thing she was really doing was making fun of her breasts, cause they are bigger than her's.
Well it kinda makes sense. She's like... 12... I mean it's not Eiken where a 10 year old can have a giant bust.
ANYWAY, nice clip you guys. I don't really have much to say this time but I really enjoyed it. Especially the banter between Ayame to Simbaga.
Ayame and hyperknees pretty much took the words out of my mouth, but I had to drop in and say how much I enjoyed everybody's work on this little clip-- it's gorgeously mixed and all the performances were so hilarious and appropriate. <3 Particular props to Motly for being such a rockin' poofter. Thank you so much for including me in this project, it's an honor to be working with so many people whose work I admire! =D
Been meaning to comment on this for a bit, and now that I have a bit o' time I figured I'd offer a critique.
Hokage Titan: Hmmm...Well, you have a strong voice, which I feel did suit the character, but your performance had a few hitches in it. First off it felt kinda forced, and very stiff at times. I like that you let loose with the yells, but I wanted you loosening up for the rest of it. I also caught a few moments were it felt like you were struggling with the words, and that I think added to the stiff feeling. A little more refinement and I think this could be a very good Baron.
Simbaga: You rocked this. Now speaking from someone who has no experience with this anime at all, I really loved this performance and voice on this character. You were quite jovial and conversational on when your character was being more casual, but you brought the intensity when you needed it. Not much else to say. I liked it a lot!
Ayame: Again, I don't have much to say here. You had to go through mocking defiance to brink-of-tears anger and you pulled it off admirably. Your voice fit the character quite well, and there is really not much I can say beyond, you did a good job! I enjoyed hearing you in this clip.
Self Critique: There were a few moments where I knew what I was trying to get across, but felt the execution was weak, but uh...beyond that I really don't have a lot to say. I enjoyed recording these lines. It was a lot of fun....that's all I got.
This was a really fun clip! I enjoyed recording for it and I enjoyed watching it!...Yeah...Good stuff!
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