[BGP] Death Note: "I am the God of the New World"

[UchihaProject]

Presents





Light Yagami & Soichiro Yagami - SuiOtoko19
Ryuk - VoiceActorDreamer
Matsuda - OmegaOptimusSupreme

ADR Director: UchihaProject
Music Editor: UchihaProject
Mixer/Editor: UchihaProject
Script Writer: UchihaProject

Critiques are greatly appreciated, I'm sure the cast and myself would love to hear what all of you have to say.

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[hyperknees91]

ahhh death note fangasmmm~

Soichiro- Good~ voice needs a bit of polish but the pitch is definitely low enough. Acting was good but it might have been just a tad overly mellow at times, still you did well here~

Light- I'm a bit picky with Light but I thought your voice was good for him. Just try and develop a smoother and lighter tone for him mainly as he does seem a bit low. The acting was really good though, I think the only thing that held you back was your mic as the peaking ensued when you got louder. Still the one line "A new world order" was very nicely delivered. Awesome awesome job~

Matsuda- Only one line...but it felt a bit too mellow as well, seemed like you were almost about to whisper it. If you spoke up a bit I think it could fix the problem though.

Ryuk- I liked the voice, but the delivery I think needed a bit more character. It felt too much like he was stating things, I think what would've really helped is to have sort of a bummed out delivery because he thinks things will be boring from now on.

[VoiceActorDreamer]

Ryuk- I liked the voice, but the delivery I think needed a bit more character. It felt too much like he was stating things, I think what would've really helped is to have sort of a bummed out delivery because he thinks things will be boring from now on.

I had a hard time doing the lines because the script had way to little words in comparison to the lip flaps. The delivery suffers from slow motion syndrome because of this.

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I had a hard time doing the lines because the script had way to little words in comparison to the lip flaps. The delivery suffers from slow motion syndrome because of this.

Yeah, sorry about that. I'll work on my script writing ^^;

[VoiceActorDreamer]

Yeah, sorry about that. I'll work on my script writing ^^;

Just remember to make the syllables match, like in the script when you only put "Well" while Ryuk was obviously saying a two syllable word which I remade into "Well well". ^^
For the last line of his it'd also probably be better to add an "It looks" before "There won't be anything" to easier match the time Ryuk has to speak without there being any silent period. =)

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