Poor Alice, she just wanted to be with her Papa man.
Alice: tsunjanai
Takashi : hokagetitan
Audio mixing: tsunjanai
video mixing: pokop
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Poor Alice, she just wanted to be with her Papa man.
Alice: tsunjanai
Takashi : hokagetitan
Audio mixing: tsunjanai
video mixing: pokop
This script sounds vaguely familiar...
who wrote out the script anyway, you or someone else?
Aside from that, it wasn't too bad, you had a nice voice for Takashi, and Tsun did pretty well for Alice's breakdown, but the first few deliveries seemed a bit off, idk, it may just be me.
Thank you for the critique so far guys! ^^ I'd like to clear up some misunderstandings... I used a script off of another fandub, if you want to see the fandub then the link to it is in the video description. My mixing wasn't very good. D: And I think that I could have done better... But overall I think this was great!
Please don't comment mainly on the script, ok? D: I didn't know that if I used lines of another fandub I had to credit it, but now I do! =D And I promise I will next time. ^^
This fandub was mainly for practicing too. D: My first in a few months. ;_;
Scripting is definitely important. Producers wouldn't take time to carefully work on it otherwise to make sure that the scene doesn't sound awkward or that the lines match the lip flaps. It's also very hard to do properly. And I know you said 'not to comment mainly on the script,' but truth be told, it was my favorite part.
EDIT: Wait, is this that chick ayu/all those other account names you had who was obsessed with tsunderes and stuff? If not, then disregard, but if so, you were definitely banned.
DOUBLE EDIT: HEH
Last edited by Y. Chang; 03-06-2011 at 07:43 PM.
I-it's not like she stole my script or anything...!!! Bakas! >:T

Ok. She used the script without asking. After realizing her mistake she credited. You can lay off now guys.
tsunjanai: It's too late now for this specific situation, but if you're going to use someone else's script, you're going to need to ask first. People actually take time out of their lives to write these things out, so it's a bit lazy and inconsiderate of you to just take somebody's work without asking.
So once you ask and only when you are given permission, are you able to use somebody's work with the addition of crediting them.
I'm also looking into this ban evasion accusation as well.
Quite the little mess this caused. *Bows* Sorry guys, I assumed she asked permission. Fail on my part, but she did credit after realizing it. So I agree with Erica here. Once again sorry for the trouble.
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