[3L Pro] Kore wa Zombie Desu ka? Episode 1 Clip - "I'm A Zombie!"

[McTricky]

Kore wa Zombie Desu ka? Episode 1 Clip - "I'm A Zombie!"

Clip done! Here's a clip from the first episode of the new Winter season show "Kore wa Zombie desu ka?" Here, Ayumu unassumingly takes on the role of being a magical girl...err...boy.

CAST:
Ayumu Aikawa :: TriPredRavage
Man/Giant Crayfish :: TheCheetoBandito
Haruna :: Ayame

Extras/Walla :: TriPredRavage, TheCheetoBandito, Cydonia, Jordan


Watch in 720HD!~

SFX: VAA SFX Library, self-made
Mixing By: McTricky

Soundtracks Used:
God Eater OST
Sora no Otoshimono Forte OST
Hexyz Force OST
Ore no Imouto ga Konnani Kawaii Wake ga Nai! OST
Star Ocean 3 (Director's Cut) OST
Kore wa Zombie Desu ka? OP Single

Enjoy!

[Jordan]

Very rather excellent, Trickeh! Full critique to come later~

[Cydonia]

This was SO good!

TriPredRavage//Aikawa - Great job! You're rather good with shouty lines aren't you? XD I think my only nitpick is where Ayumu is transforming. Your "It's working... It's working!" lines sound a little... awkward... I don't know, they sounded a little fake. I couldn't really believe it. I can't explain what I mean. I think they needed more shock to them. He's transforming into a witch after all. xD Other than that though, it was very, very good. Great emotion! I think you really got to know Aikawa's character here, so really good job. I'd just like to say that I laughed a LOT when Aikawa yells, "Ah, to hell with it! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!" you absolutely NAILED that, and I loved it. XD

TheCheetoBandito//Crayfish - Omggggg. So good! So GOOD! Excellent! I can't nitpick at anything! I'm still very intimidated by you, considering I had the lovely privilege to watch you record a couple of your lines for this. D: I think at times I couldn't understand what you were saying slightly, but obviously, it was because of the voice effect and stuff. I loved your very last line though. I laughed a lot. xD

Ayame//Haruna - Great acting here, Ayame, but... there was something that wasn't right. I didn't really like your voice on Haruna. I think you sounded a bit too mature for her. I know cutesy voices on magical anime girls are pretty lame, but I think in this case, you did need to sound a tad cute. Also, I noticed that there wasn't a redo for the "Prodigious" line, which kinda threw me off. I thought Tricky was going to ask you to redo it after the little teaser clip. It's "Pro-Dih-Jus' and not 'Prod-Ih-Jus'. Sorry if I'm being picky. xD I did like your acting very much, though. I just think that if you used a higher voice, and sounded a bit more energetic, it would have worked a lot better.

Tri/Cheeto/Cydonia/Jordan//Extras/Walla - Lmao, we were all fantastic. I think my favourite was Jordan's: "Well, I'm scarred for life." XDDDDD Go us!

Mixing: Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreat job, Tricky. Music choice was rather fabulous.

More plz. Jus' sayin'.

[Bree]

I loved this<3 If I'm not lazy I'll full critique when I'm done watch new Fairy Tail /lame
Everyone fit their parts perfectly! I also got a kick out of Jordan's Walla 'I'm scared for life' XD The mixing also seemed flawless to me. Great job everyone!

-Bree

[TriPredRavage]

VERY good. My only complaints up front are that at the beginning the chair doesn't make a noise when Aikawa jumps out of it, and that when Aikawa and Haruna do the chant, because the video is flipped, the voices are on the wrong sides. XD

I'm the first English Aikawa voice ever! Yay!

[hyperknees91]

That man panties scene is going to scar me for life...

Aikawa- You're voice fit the character well and your powerful attack lines were all well done, I think I liked your last few lines where you're thinking to yourself were my favorite from you here. The rest of the lines though I didn't really care for, you seem a bit stiff overall and tighten your expression too much. If you allowed your character to be a bit more animated (especially when his arm is broken) it might bring a bit more color to his character.

Haruna- The voice seemed to work ok, I like her chanting lines the most not a thing wrong with them xD. I do think you need to let yourself have more energy and expression with this character as you also come across as rather stiff. Mainly it seems like you'll deliver the first part of a line, then you'll deliver the next part in the same fashion several times where I think changing it up would help it flow better. I think if you allowed yourself to be a tad more bombastic with such a character she might come across a bit more fun to listen to xD

Crayfish- I liked this alot, especially when you transformed you were fantastic. Great line variety and great energy overall, nothing I can really say but you were alot of fun to hear!

[Jordan]

CRITIQUE TIME.

Ayumu Aikawa [TriPredRavage] - I really liked your energy in this performance. You're the King of Screaming. My only nitpick is that the "No!" in response to Haruna's "Do you like dudes?" question didn't quite fit the lip flaps. I think a "No way!" would've fit a bit better, but that's more of a scripting error than anything.

Crayfish Monster Man Face Thing [TheCheetoBandito] - You have to tell me how you make those BRRRRBBBBLLLLL noises. Really nice work, I don't really have anything to critique about it.

Haruna [Ayame] - I actually rather like the voice you used for her. She still had that snobby tone to it. My only complaint is that you could've used more energy or something, because some of the lines that required some oomph were rather oomphless. If you're going to take on this role again, just keep in mind that she's pretty hyper. Nice work, though.

Walla [You Walla-ers] - I lol'd.

Mixing - Very good mixing, although there were a couple of bits and pieces here and there that I thought were kind of lacking. Like the door sliding open, the chair, maybe throw in a funny sound effect for when Ayumu's jumping out of the chair, the Crayfish Monster Man Face Thing was the only one that had footstep SFX as he approached Ayumu, who was backing away, and at the end when Haruna appointed Ayumu a witch, she could've had a dramatic whoosh sound. But other than that, this was a tough one to mix and you did very well.

Great job, everyone!

[Hokage Titan]

This was simply awesome. xD Cydonia and Hyperknees pretty much said what I was gonna say. xD

And yes Tri, you are indeed the first Aikawa voice. You beat me to it. xD Must finish my clip now..

[Ayame]

Lovely! Haha, I love playing Haruna =) I'll try to give her more "oomph" next time, because I agree that it's not there in this clip. I don't really have anything to add to the critiques, since I agree with everything that's been said. Though I do want to say that I LOVE TriPredRavage's yelling/screaming lines, because they deserve tons of praise. And TheCheetoBandito's crayfish was great. There've never been a ton of deep-voiced guys on the VAA, so I was pleased to hear that there are still some =)

As for the mixing, it was really good, and I think most of the others have already pointed out areas that could use improvement, but I'd like to add that Haruna's thought could have used some sort of reverb to make it more apparent that it was a thought.

Overall, great clip! Can't wait for more!

[Seymour]

My god...aside from the huge manties moment, that clip was just incredible, and the acting was what really sold it, and this was truly the finest performance I've heard from Tri and Cheeto since..well..ever.
Ayame did pretty well on her part too, but as mentioned needs a little more of a push. But still a high class performance right there.

Mixing wise...well..have you ever really disappoint me on that?

Do more clips, PLEASE DO MORE CLIPS.
k bai