[IP] A l t e r e d - M i n d s e t (The Radioplay) - Episode Two [NEW!]

[Gan Xingba]

Good stuff. The production quality is only continuing to improve as it goes on, it seems. Same with the voice acting. Count’s definitely slurring less, for example, and I like how you’ve tweaked your voice for Melanie, Cydonia. Taking out some of the breathiness has helped it feel more natural and improved your delivery a lot. In general just a lot to enjoy about these performances. Mizura did an excellent job with those pained lines and I can’t decide whether TriPred or Tara won that smugness contest. Solid showing from Cheeto, Bryson and B.R.O. as well. No real weaknesses in the whole thing. Keep it comin’.

[Cydonia]

Thanks for the feedback so far, guys! I'm so glad that you are enjoying it! <3 I know a lot of people were anticipating the second episode, so I'm surprised that there haven't been any more comments/critiques, so I'd really appreciate more feedback! :3

[rebelcheese]

I think this episode was a tiny bit harder to follow than the first. The dialogue lines are closer together, creating a rapid-fire effect that doesn't sound natural in conversation unless there's a heated argument or something. Try to split the lines slightly further apart to try to achieve a more natural effect. The SFX also felt a bit sparse but as this was mostly a talking episode I don't think it's that big of a deal.

The story's still intriguing and the acting's great, but the dialogue would be more memorable if the lines were better positioned.

[Cydonia]

Some people are saying the pacing is better, whilst others are saying it's a little bit too fast. O_o But okay, I guess we're all different when it comes to using our ears. XD I'll take that into account for the next episode. Thanks for listening though, rebelcheese, I really do appreciate your input.
It'll be a wait for episode three. I have a trip planned, but I'll probably script out some ideas on my flight. I wouldn't expect episode three until the end of April or so.

[Cydonia]

Gonna give this a bit of a bump! :3

[Seymour]

Finally listened to it all, and quite frankly, this entire project is just. plain. awesome
Everyone portrayed their roles quite well, the emotion sounded so real, and honestly it painted a disturbing, yet beautiful image in my head.
Cydonia and your cast, I applaud you all for a wondrous performance, and I wait with anticipation for the next episode

[aqua_dolphin]

Cool a radio play I haven't notice. I going to check it out ^_^