Spiral Fandub Scene

[Chrisiscool86]

Okay so I randomly decided to post this very very old scene that me and a good friend did. Critique me to your hearts content, I'm sure I need it ^^;; enjoy.

[ame="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MK4sDYnAwDI"]YouTube - Spiral Fandub[/ame]


Chrisiscool86(ChrisThurmanVA) - Ayumu, Kanone

SCTWeasel(Youtube) - Hiyono, Madoka, Rio

[hyperknees91]

I was gonna check this show out but I'll have to get around to it some other time.

I'm not very familiar with the characters so I'll just have to make some general suggestions.

Chris- Your voice actually could fit both the characters quite well (they do sound a bit too similar though and I don't think an accent is enough to seperate them). But anyway I think mainly for Ayumu your voice is a tad on the airy side, you'll want to try and form a very nice, clean smooth voice for these types of characters (nothing like overly smooth but just having that anime esqueness to it), though your pitch and such was definately in the right place and you sound the right age. I think as far as acting I think you might have focused on being a overly gloomy. I think it would have been better for him to act blunt, and straightforward with a rather stoic edge to it. You did sound like you were playing the cool guy still so points for that, also good job on making your lines vary so that he wasn't static.

Weasel- Mainly I couldn't hear you very well because of your mic lawl. I think from what I can tell mainly I would just work on diction a tad as your enunciation faltered at some points. Also try and speak up a tad more (well this might just be your mic so don't hold me to that) seemed like you were still being a bit quiet at times. I thought you handled all 3 characters differently enough though which is more than I can ever say about myself haha. Anyway mainly I think investing into a better mic might be worth your while (even a rockband mic would be enough).

Anyway I would raise the vocals a tad cuz the music overpowers them at time but good job otherwise~

[Chrisiscool86]

Thanks ^^ even though this was pretty old, this still helped a lot. So thank you!

[Takatsuki]

Chrisiscool86 - You as Ayumu was pretty good but I can't say the same for Kanone.

SCTWeasel - The way she recorded(or it could be her mic) wasn't very good but I thought her acting was nice.