Belphegor english fandub (vs Gokudera) 1/3

[Atamagahen]

Description:
Since I have nothing better to do, I've decided to dub Bel for the whole battle of the storm, I also figured it would be a good idea to gain reputation for voicing a certain character. This will come in three parts total. You'll have to excuse my poor quality microphone, I did what I could to improve the sound. Thanks for the positive and/or constructive comments. If you like this, feel free to share with others.

[ame="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ip5gLKRW0hM"]YouTube - Belphegor english fandub (vs Gokudera) 1/3[/ame]

[Kei]

Mmmm. I don't have a problem with the pitch or the voice persay, I say the biggest thing you can work on is your delivery. All your lines were all rather...one note, which I think mainly comes from your inexperience with voice acting, so it's good you're practicing! I think you were also limited, in your acting freedom, because you were trying to match subbed lines to the lip flaps. It's honestly easier on you if you rewrite the lines to fit the characters lips. It does take some time, but I think you'll appreciate it in the long run.

Another thing I noticed was that you were keeping your voice soft and quiet to try and convey that creepy Bel tone, but it came off too soft and almost 'mumbly'. Speak up and annunciate! You can be creepy AND clear =] You're admiration for this character is definitely a plus, so don't stop practicing! I know you'll keep working to improve it!

P.S: For future reference, this type of dub belongs in the VIDEO Boredom, Tests, and Progress section! =]

[Atamagahen]

My voice is actually naturally soft, but I appreciate it anyways.